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Mum To Son

Please do not lose yourself along lifes path

Never forget who ‘you’ are

Retain your kind and compassionate nature

Remember your roots…don’t stray afar


Never expect….. forever remain humble

Work hard…stay an honest man

Continue to treat all others as equals

Enjoy your life, love and laugh….simply be the best ‘you’ can!

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/30/2024 8:20:00 AM

What a wonderful message with loving sincere thoughts penned in this write. Blessings to you and your son, dear friend Deb. Hugs Jen.

Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:41:00 PM

You are so lovely Jen l appreciate your kind words ! …..Debx

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2024 2:38:00 PM

wise advice indeed Deb, an excellent poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:39:00 PM

Thanks Jan….no matter how old they are we still like to give advice ha! Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/28/2024 11:53:00 AM

WOW!!! What a great write to your son. I hope you printed this off for him. It would make a great card. Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away................

Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:39:00 PM

No he hasn't seen it but he will…..thankyou Paula…..Debx

Jay Narain

Date: 10/28/2024 10:42:00 AM

great advice to children. I hope they will understand one day.

Deb M
Date: 10/28/2024 10:57:00 AM

He is grown Jay and he possesses all those qualities but l just wanted to leave him a little reminder for when l leave this world! Always lovely to see you Jay! Thanks…Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/28/2024 10:33:00 AM

Dear Deb, This is the answer to: What wisdom should a child who is ready to step into adulthood be given? That is so well said in understandable language. I have always wanted my daughters to learn the same lessons, and I believe they have. GREAT WISDOM! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Deb M
Date: 10/28/2024 10:55:00 AM

Thankyou Daniel….Soupmail! Debx