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Muir's Mountain Is Calling

Oh! to be among trees, mindful of silent power 
in mountains hallowed trails walked by Muir
snow still filling nature’s deep kept secret bower
breathe a bounty of sweet air clear and pure

the rush of streams in springs ever rapid plunge
music played to my footsteps beating drum
water dripping into the grounds wet sponge
snow melts as flowers start to thrive and thrum

he set about recording each feeling, plant and rock
tramped trails knowing there was hidden a clue
we roam the mountain as one of his unknown flock
interlace our souls in a weave that’s as old as it’s new

what words can be found dropped into this silence
when distraction is nothing more than a birds wing
no screens to scream about the daily violence
just lessons of earths sacred bounty worn like a ring 

where your eyes meet what has lived serenity bound
falling trees that heard the soil cry with sympathy
decays gift of life as the circle comes to meet around
aligned in time to hear its own life of pure symmetry   

caught in a fast web of our own handcrafted design
we can let go to journey upon a mountain path
what Muir saw as seasons to be so innately divine
we carry within our spirits in an inherited shared bath

So! On to the forests and into the depths of green
wear visions of blue sky caught in the white giants lure
adventures drift into the dreams that you’ve seen
on pathways not hallways we answer our cries cure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/30/2020 3:26:00 AM
Powerful imagery, Jeanne! Love the crystal clear pictures that form one by one in this your ever-revealing poetic journey...enjoyed lots. My very best wishes. :) john
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Date: 7/30/2020 9:04:00 AM
Jeanne, soon after I asked you if you had written about your love of the outdoors, I found this! This writing indicates a deep spiritual connection with the trails and vistas and fresh air that I can certainly relate to. Muir was a hero who took his experiences to Washington DC to fight for the preservation of this beauty and majesty. Love your contrast between the great outdoors and the screens we spend much of our day watching. "Just lessons of earths sacred bounty". Love this, a FAV ~ John
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