Mudlark Echoes

Across the flats where mudlarks toiled,
where in a day the pittance made
would barely serve to wash the soiled;
a stark reward for labors paid.
When then I shook from daydream's stares
to trod upon its sucking grasp
and seek what proof the tides have bared
- small fragments of a spartan past.
Yet now alone, except the birds
who search the teaming flats for food,
the glee of children can be heard
as echoes from the Thames intrudes.
   Again the ebb's retreating tides
   expose the secrets that it hides.

(Dedicated to the poor, who searched in the mudflats of Thames for something of value to trade for food)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Dear Craig, your poetic finesse with atmospheric imagery is truly elevated and brings me to experience the mudflats through the "mudlark echoes" with my heart, soul and imagination. A breathtaking sonnet, a heartbreaking life. Your honor the poor with this amazing poem, my friend.. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Craig, a well-crafted sonnet bringing history to life. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 7 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 8 has already started.
Cornish Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 3:52 AM
Thanks so much Mark!
Goff Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 12:15 AM
Yes Craig, was pulled into the sequencing of dreamlike imagery of this well penned write, very nicely done!
Godwin Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Wonderful job, Craig - the imagery and feel both flowed impressively! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Watkins Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 5:04 PM
I was glued to each word and it flowed, and yet served liked a two sided coin. Well done. - Charlotte
Michael Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:14 PM
I felt a loneliness in this write...echoes from afar...
Cornish Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 9:01 PM
Thanks so much Arturo - you have a great name btw
Kauffman Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:56 PM
Hi Craig, in the midst of the struggle for life, so elegantly penned, there is the sound of children and the promise that the best can still happen on the next tide. Lovely flow and rhythm along with your stunning images.
Cornish Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Very kind Sam, thank you!
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 12:39 PM
wow... this is powerful and eerie at the same time... excellent write Craig...I stand in awe of your talent time and time again... hugs and blessings!
Cornish Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:18 PM
Very kind once more Sandy, thank you
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