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Mudlark Echoes

Across the flats where mudlarks toiled, where in a day the pittance made would barely serve to wash the soiled; a stark reward for labors paid. When then I shook from daydream's stares to trod upon its sucking grasp and seek what proof the tides have bared - small fragments of a spartan past. Yet now alone, except the birds who search the teaming flats for food, the glee of children can be heard as echoes from the Thames intrudes. Again the ebb's retreating tides expose the secrets that it hides. In Tetrameter - March 24, 2020

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Date: 4/2/2020 12:15:00 AM
Yes Craig, was pulled into the sequencing of dreamlike imagery of this well penned write, very nicely done!
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Date: 4/1/2020 6:14:00 PM
Wonderful job, Craig - the imagery and feel both flowed impressively! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/26/2020 5:04:00 PM
I was glued to each word and it flowed, and yet served liked a two sided coin. Well done. - Charlotte
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Date: 3/24/2020 6:14:00 PM
I felt a loneliness in this write...echoes from afar...
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Craig Cornish
Date: 3/24/2020 9:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Arturo - you have a great name btw
Date: 3/24/2020 1:56:00 PM
Hi Craig, in the midst of the struggle for life, so elegantly penned, there is the sound of children and the promise that the best can still happen on the next tide. Lovely flow and rhythm along with your stunning images.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 3/24/2020 2:05:00 PM
Very kind Sam, thank you!
Date: 3/24/2020 12:39:00 PM
wow... this is powerful and eerie at the same time... excellent write Craig...I stand in awe of your talent time and time again... hugs and blessings!
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Craig Cornish
Date: 3/24/2020 1:18:00 PM
Very kind once more Sandy, thank you

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