Muddy Road

time's landscape blackened by the feet of many men foolishly walking © Faye Lanham Gibson, April 8, 2015

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Date: 4/18/2015 5:06:00 PM

Faye, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA

Date: 4/13/2015 10:21:00 AM

deep imagery in short, Faye. Congrats. Mohan

Date: 4/12/2015 11:15:00 AM

Very clever, Faye! Congrats on your win! // paul

Date: 4/12/2015 9:10:00 AM

This is a great Senryu! Congrats on your win Faye.

Date: 4/11/2015 10:05:00 PM

yes, yes, this is GOOD!!! Congrats on a very well deserved win, Faye.

Date: 4/11/2015 1:30:00 PM

This is terrific Faye...truly one of the finest

Date: 4/11/2015 10:34:00 AM

wow!!! that speaks so much Faye.. :) congrats!. //olive eloisa

Date: 4/11/2015 10:00:00 AM

How do you spell fantastic? Capital FAYE...Really...so little so much...I want more! Thanks for being in my contest..

Date: 4/11/2015 9:59:00 AM

many congrats on your win Faye - great senryu:-) Hugs jan x