Mud Puddle

white, Sunday dress on a clean-faced girl ~ black mud puddle

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/20/2012 1:42:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in this haiku Rhonda. Thanks for stooping by to read mine. That isn't for the contest.. The 'rain' one is. Now on second thoughts, I'm not very sure which one to enter :)) love...

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/21/2012 1:38:00 PM

Thank you,Gautami! I read both your haiku and I like them both. Good luck deciding which one to enter. Blessings, Rhonda :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2012 7:06:00 PM

Great juxtaposition (or whatever the heck that is called!!!)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/19/2012 7:09:00 PM

Thanks so much!! LOL. I can't say it, but I guess I can do it!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2012 6:06:00 AM

Nicely done haiku Rhonda,well done! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/19/2012 7:09:00 PM

Thanks Anne!! Blessings, Rhonda

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 2/18/2012 2:49:00 PM

Fantastic Rhonda! Is this for Charle's contest? If so...I think you will do well!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/18/2012 8:28:00 PM

Thank you, Natalie! Yes, I entered this one in Charlie's contest. I hope I do OK, but if I don't, I will use it as an opportunity to improve. One of the reasons I'm here. Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2012 8:26:00 AM

great visuals Rhonda.. good luck in contest.. reminds me of my sons in their youth..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/18/2012 8:25:00 PM

My son has never liked getting dirty, but now that he's getting older, I see him changing. I guess it's a good thing. At least that's what I keep telling myself. LOL Thanks, Linda-Marie, for reading my work today. Blessings, Rhonda