Much Too Late



It was a cold metal burn,
love fatal GSW
A bullet to the head,
exited my heart
Shot went straight thru
Silencer tears
pressing on the pillow, 
buried me in my sleep
Whispering to the half-dead dying:
It was business not personal
Such empty words offering no real comforting 
Nine hundred and eleven seconds of fame
briefly made me 
a statistical passionate-less victim celebrity
An emotional second amendment casualty
The first responder 
who came to rescue me,
she was too late ...
much too late
Too much time had passed 
since my lungs collapsed
Her CPR kisses couldn’t revive me
It was too late,
much too late
Too much time had gone by 
since my world collapsed
I was pronounced brain dead,
with her lavender scent still lodged in my head
Femme fatale tears
kibosh pillow buried me
Now I have only dead feeling dreams
in my dirt-covered sleep
A love I thought was real,
was only a zombie sleepwalking fantasy
I wish I coulda shown some signs of life
to the first responder 
who tried to revive me
But it was too late,
much too late
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 1:28 AM
Great. I love it how and that you 'sneaked in' the second amendment...
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January 29, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Damn Freddie, now that sounds like betrayal and false emotions.... poor guy...
Manassian Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Oh...this is ....so visceral. You captured me from start to finish. What a way to describe a hopeless situation. Too late...Fantastic ending to an angst filled piece.
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