Constance La France Poet Pantoum

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Ms Potato Head's Diet

 
I feel like Ms. Potato head today,
the mirror does not lie about my fat.
For a diet is needed!  Will I stray?
Oh, I will be amazing to look at !

The mirror does not lie about my fat,
I wish that I could just snap my fingers;
oh, I will be amazing to look at,
but, in odd spots ... potato fat lingers !

I wish that I could just snap my fingers.
For a diet is needed !  Will I stray?
But, in odd spots ... potato fat lingers.
I feel like Ms. Potato head today !

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July 12, 2021


Poetry/Pantoum/Ms Potato Head's Diet
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1371-636-12
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

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Written for the Standard contest Pantoum Rhyne 1
sponsor, Eve Roper, Judged 08/12/2021

First Place

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Sam Kauffman August 17, 2021 at 10:23 AM Oh those crazy mirrors - like a fun house with an attitude! Congrats on your win Constance! This is fun! Constance La France August 17, 2021 at 10:36 AM Sam, thanks for the congrats, oh I hate those fun house mirrors ~ Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 16, 2021 at 2:35 PM Congratulations! These poems are so much fun! Constance La France August 17, 2021 at 7:50 AM Mala, thanks for the congratulations, yes, the contest was fun to write for ~Constance

Janice Canerdy August 16, 2021 at 1:39 PM A big CONGRATS on your win, Constance. Janice Constance La France August 17, 2021 at 7:50 AM Janice, thanks for the congats ~Constance

Christuraj Alex August 16, 2021 at 9:13 AM Great Work. Congratulations on your win! Constance La France August 17, 2021 at 7:51 AM Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance

Eve Roper August 13, 2021 at 8:31 PM Constance, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Constance La France August 15, 2021 at 8:27 AM Eve, thanks for the contest, that was fun! And for my placement ~ Constance

Joanna Daniel July 14, 2021 at 2:20 AM Enjoyed this one, Constance, cute:) Constance La France July 14, 2021 at 8:39 AM Jo, thanks so much for the visit and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu July 13, 2021 at 4:32 PM Hello Constance, a cute poem you created love and sernity. Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu July 14, 2021 at 11:14 AM Hello Constance, you are welcome my friend. Peace and tranquility. Darlene Constance La France July 14, 2021 at 8:40 AM Darlene, thanks for the compliment so much ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Caren Krutsinger July 13, 2021 at 8:34 AM This is adorable Constance! Constance La France July 13, 2021 at 8:35 AM Caren, thanks so my for the visit and comment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Rama Balasubramanian July 13, 2021 at 8:24 AM I laughed as I read this. Wonderful entry for contest. All the best Constance La France July 13, 2021 at 8:28 AM Rama, thanks for visiting my silly poem, hope Eve likes it, actually I am not fat but do love potatoes that part is true ~ love and serenity _Constance

Harry Horsman July 12, 2021 at 7:05 PM I can relate to this gem, Constance, its funny and many things come to mind, when reading between the lines,,,Subtle is the word and very clever. Constance La France July 13, 2021 at 8:29 AM Harry, thanks for the comment, yes, between the lines are piles of French fries ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

David Mchattie July 12, 2021 at 5:00 PM You were having fun with this one. Love the cartoon. Losing weight is tough. I'm in the same boat. Have a great day my friend. Constance La France July 13, 2021 at 8:30 AM David, thanks for the comment, yes, I feel that I have been on a diet forever ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Jan Allison July 12, 2021 at 12:26 PM what a fun poem Constance you excel at any form you write and i love the humour here:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France July 13, 2021 at 8:31 AM Jan, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, see I do have a sense of humor beneath all my serious poem penning ~ love and serenity _Constance