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Ms Potato Head's Diet

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I feel like Ms. Potato head today, the mirror does not lie about my fat. For a diet is needed! Will I stray? Oh, I will be amazing to look at ! The mirror does not lie about my fat, I wish that I could just snap my fingers; oh, I will be amazing to look at, but, in odd spots ... potato fat lingers ! I wish that I could just snap my fingers. For a diet is needed ! Will I stray? But, in odd spots ... potato fat lingers. I feel like Ms. Potato head today ! ____________________ July 12, 2021 Poetry/Pantoum/Ms Potato Head's Diet Copyright Protected, ID 07-1371-636-12 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Inspiration Image #3 Written for the Standard contest Pantoum Rhyne 1 sponsor, Eve Roper, Judged 08/12/2021 First Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/17/2021 10:23:00 AM

Oh those crazy mirrors - like a fun house with an attitude! Congrats on your win Constance! This is fun!

Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2021 10:36:00 AM

Sam, thanks for the congrats, oh I hate those fun house mirrors ~ Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/16/2021 2:35:00 PM

Congratulations! These poems are so much fun!

Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2021 7:50:00 AM

Mala, thanks for the congratulations, yes, the contest was fun to write for ~Constance

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/16/2021 1:39:00 PM

A big CONGRATS on your win, Constance. Janice

Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2021 7:50:00 AM

Janice, thanks for the congats ~Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/16/2021 9:13:00 AM

Great Work. Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2021 7:51:00 AM

Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 8/13/2021 8:31:00 PM

Constance, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2021 8:27:00 AM

Eve, thanks for the contest, that was fun! And for my placement ~ Constance

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/14/2021 2:20:00 AM

Enjoyed this one, Constance, cute:)

Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2021 8:39:00 AM

Jo, thanks so much for the visit and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/13/2021 4:32:00 PM

Hello Constance, a cute poem you created love and sernity. Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2021 11:14:00 AM

Hello Constance, you are welcome my friend. Peace and tranquility. Darlene

Constance La France
Date: 7/14/2021 8:40:00 AM

Darlene, thanks for the compliment so much ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2021 8:34:00 AM

This is adorable Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 7/13/2021 8:35:00 AM

Caren, thanks so my for the visit and comment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/13/2021 8:24:00 AM

I laughed as I read this. Wonderful entry for contest. All the best

Constance La France
Date: 7/13/2021 8:28:00 AM

Rama, thanks for visiting my silly poem, hope Eve likes it, actually I am not fat but do love potatoes that part is true ~ love and serenity _Constance

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/12/2021 7:05:00 PM

I can relate to this gem, Constance, its funny and many things come to mind, when reading between the lines,,,Subtle is the word and very clever.

Constance La France
Date: 7/13/2021 8:29:00 AM

Harry, thanks for the comment, yes, between the lines are piles of French fries ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

David Mchattie

Date: 7/12/2021 5:00:00 PM

You were having fun with this one. Love the cartoon. Losing weight is tough. I'm in the same boat. Have a great day my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 7/13/2021 8:30:00 AM

David, thanks for the comment, yes, I feel that I have been on a diet forever ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 7/12/2021 12:26:00 PM

what a fun poem Constance you excel at any form you write and i love the humour here:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 7/13/2021 8:31:00 AM

Jan, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, see I do have a sense of humor beneath all my serious poem penning ~ love and serenity _Constance