Mrs Jack Spratt

Mrs. Jack Spratt
Ate all of the fat,
Because Jack was mean
And ate all the lean.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 31, 2014 at 12:14 AM
Joyce,Congrats, on your win. Enjoyed the Clerihew, ,Take Care ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 5:32 PM
JOYCE, Congrats, awesome Clerihew...xox ~LINDA~
Onclaud Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:44 AM
engaging write, joyce... congrats on your win.. huggs
Jerden Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 2:59 PM
And now we know..... The REST of the story! Congratulations Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 1:58 PM
Dear Joyce, This is a very funny clerihew! I should think Mr. Spratt would be wanting his wife to slim down a bit. LOL Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Sergi Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 11:38 AM
Hi Joyce: A very clever retort on a nursery rhyme. Congrats on your win.
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May 25, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Joyce, when I read it, my first thought was that it was too much like the nursery rhyme, but then I thought it over and found it was clever how you gave a REASON for Mrs. spratt eating only fat. It's because her dang husband wouldn't let her!!! Congrats for your win.
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May 18, 2014 at 2:33 PM
LOL, yes, I always wondered about him too : ) Hope you are feeing well, Joyce, and having fun xx
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