Mr Sorrows

One day God was suffering from sorrows
Because everyone complaining about the sorrows.

Angry god made his mind
Curse a face without any kind.

Thus sorrows became Mr Sorrows
Now Mr. Sorrows will face the sorrows.

Real world and real sorrows
Ready to welcome Mr Sorrows.

First day of new born Mr Sorrow
Will pay interest for past borrows.

By hook and cook he found
Deserted village far from crowd.

The poor knows the poor's need
So he got both without any heed.

Warm welcome was going on
Till the introduction was not on.

Mr Sorrow sang his brave tale
Myself caused all of your hell.

Destroyer of all  happiness
Thief of health, wealth and peace.

All hatred works for you i done
Because i liked pain with fun.

I seperated your dear ones
Countless time not for once.

No sooner did he stop reply
A thunder flashed in the sky.
 
All memories and sorrows post
As swarm of lusts recalled host.

Mind became mirror of the past
Sea of emotions ready to blast.

Uncontrolled mind and heart
Echoing revange only i want.

Blood is running in veins hard
Sound of slapped listened without gaurd.

Slapped first, kicked and hand's blow
Never tasted past the poor fellow.

Kill him! Kill him! Kill him the sound
Echoing everywhere ,forest as hound.

Catch and kill him unpleasent sound
Chasing him with increasing sound.

Mr Sorrows was running fast
 Bare feet with heavy heart.

Everyone after introduction
Threw stones without interruption.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Congrats on your win, Arjun. Well done.
Jangid Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Thank a lot Dear Line Gauthier i never considered myself winner. A poem is written a few month ago and nobody interested in its second part to read.
Deo Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Amen and ameen! Do not the Hajis throw tstones at IBLIS at Mecca? This is so original, and SORROW will be gone when we cooperate. The start is to NOT judge anyone; leave revenge to God. Then we pray for the peace in all cpuntries. Third, I pray for justice and wealth in the third world, so their people will not become refugees. Salaam and thanks so much. Anil
Jangid Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Good morning sir Thank for your precious time
Jangid Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 11:16 PM
It is only first day of Mr Sorrows on the planet. He will suffer every kind of pain on upcoming days. This poem will be continue till mr sorrows become a kind god again. Comment if you liked Also comment if you dont like. Comments are welcome.
Deo Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 5:22 PM
excellent idea - I ook forward to more in this series. You have so many original ideas. salaam and Peace/shanthi
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