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Mr Snowman

Snowflakes swirl of white in different shapes round and round full of spirit they can’t escape falling, falling from the blue vault of heaven draping the cold ground Everything vanishing in white never fearing twinkling, blinking, and sparkling clinging and hugging the trees so dearest Our eyes light up smiles spread over our faces Mum helps to bundle us up warm from head to toe so we won’t get numb playing in the snow Bentley barks, spinning around wagging his tail delighted to join us Soft snowflakes kiss our faces oh so gently as we lie on the fluffy snow flapping our legs and arms like wings while Bentley runs around ebulliently licking our faces Springing up to our feet, throwing snowballs intently Roll and roll as much as we can of the snow stacking three –high building our snowman Big and small black buttons For a mouth, eyes, and its tummy, a small rose plum it looks so dumb for a nose “Oh so funny!” Holly pinned to a felt black top hat for his head Bentley tugs to tighten a red woolen scarf around his neck Oh what a delight Mr. Red Cardinal decides to alight on Mr. Snowman’s holly to peck on the red berries
12/13/2016
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Sathasivam Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Excellent write. A joy of snow man. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Thank you, Ravi. Hugs and Merry Christmas.
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 6:21 PM
what a delightful poem Eve the imagery is absolutely wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Jan, saw the picture and couldn't resist... Hugs
Turner Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Please, no snow for me thank you. Your muse has befriended your inner child, Mrs Eve. Really a fun poem:)
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:46 PM
I promise no snow, Daniel, actually memories i would have love to have had. Hugs
Y. Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:49 AM
Hi Eve, I really enjoyed this Christmas poem.The closest I've gotten to a "Snowman " was watching "Frosty The Snowman "on tv as a kid. It's a dream to actually build. You expressed that feeling very well in this piece. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Thank you, Alexis, snow is so wonderful, but wear your sunglasses it can also be blinding to much white that really shimmers ... Hugs
Green Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 6:54 AM
This was fun and beautiful Eve. Brings back memories of my childhood and building snowmen and playing in the snow. Thanks so much for sharing this.
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:51 PM
You are very welcome, Chris, I'm tickled I brought some memories.. Hugs and Merry Chirstmas
Oule Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 6:51 AM
My Fav Lines and Stanza, Holly pinned to a felt black top hat for his head Bentley tugs to tighten a red woolen scarf around his neck Oh what a delight Mr. Red Cardinal decides to alight on Mr. Snowman’s holly to peck on the red berries Nice works Eve
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Hello, Bryan, I try to write what I see. I have a little dog that if you lay on the floor he goes crazy with the kisses... Hugs and thank you so very much
Andresen Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 5:23 AM
- The joy of a snowman .... enjoy reading, Eve :) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Sunshine, you probably have a lot of snow in Norway.. Thank you for enjoying the story Hugs and Merry Christmas
Wolf Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 11:48 PM
What a delightful lil snowman poem, Eve! Great imagery! It's hard to imagine snow over here right now!
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, Rick, I'm in Tx so no I can not imagine it here Hugs and Merry Christmas :) * *
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