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Mr Snowman

Snowflakes swirl of white in different shapes round and round full of spirit they can’t escape falling, falling from the blue vault of heaven draping the cold ground Everything vanishing in white never fearing twinkling, blinking, and sparkling clinging and hugging the trees so dearest Our eyes light up smiles spread over our faces Mum helps to bundle us up warm from head to toe so we won’t get numb playing in the snow Bentley barks, spinning around wagging his tail delighted to join us Soft snowflakes kiss our faces oh so gently as we lie on the fluffy snow flapping our legs and arms like wings while Bentley runs around ebulliently licking our faces Springing up to our feet, throwing snowballs intently Roll and roll as much as we can of the snow stacking three –high building our snowman Big and small black buttons For a mouth, eyes, and its tummy, a small rose plum it looks so dumb for a nose “Oh so funny!” Holly pinned to a felt black top hat for his head Bentley tugs to tighten a red woolen scarf around his neck Oh what a delight Mr. Red Cardinal decides to alight on Mr. Snowman’s holly to peck on the red berries
12/13/2016
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Date: 12/14/2016 10:43:00 PM
Excellent write. A joy of snow man. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/15/2016 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Ravi. Hugs and Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/14/2016 6:21:00 PM
what a delightful poem Eve the imagery is absolutely wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2016 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, saw the picture and couldn't resist... Hugs
Date: 12/14/2016 10:19:00 AM
Please, no snow for me thank you. Your muse has befriended your inner child, Mrs Eve. Really a fun poem:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2016 7:46:00 PM
I promise no snow, Daniel, actually memories i would have love to have had. Hugs
Date: 12/14/2016 7:49:00 AM
Hi Eve, I really enjoyed this Christmas poem.The closest I've gotten to a "Snowman " was watching "Frosty The Snowman "on tv as a kid. It's a dream to actually build. You expressed that feeling very well in this piece. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2016 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis, snow is so wonderful, but wear your sunglasses it can also be blinding to much white that really shimmers ... Hugs
Date: 12/14/2016 6:54:00 AM
This was fun and beautiful Eve. Brings back memories of my childhood and building snowmen and playing in the snow. Thanks so much for sharing this.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2016 7:51:00 PM
You are very welcome, Chris, I'm tickled I brought some memories.. Hugs and Merry Chirstmas
Date: 12/14/2016 6:51:00 AM
My Fav Lines and Stanza, Holly pinned to a felt black top hat for his head Bentley tugs to tighten a red woolen scarf around his neck Oh what a delight Mr. Red Cardinal decides to alight on Mr. Snowman’s holly to peck on the red berries Nice works Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2016 7:53:00 PM
Hello, Bryan, I try to write what I see. I have a little dog that if you lay on the floor he goes crazy with the kisses... Hugs and thank you so very much
Date: 12/14/2016 5:23:00 AM
- The joy of a snowman .... enjoy reading, Eve :) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2016 7:54:00 PM
Sunshine, you probably have a lot of snow in Norway.. Thank you for enjoying the story Hugs and Merry Christmas
Date: 12/13/2016 11:48:00 PM
What a delightful lil snowman poem, Eve! Great imagery! It's hard to imagine snow over here right now!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2016 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Rick, I'm in Tx so no I can not imagine it here Hugs and Merry Christmas :) * *
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