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Mr Right Was Left

Mr. Right Was Left To be right was his right And everyone had to listen; If, then, they disagreed, Well, that was so much tension. Mr. Right’s views were all his own, Whether current events or not, You have to feel so sorry for him, Cause being “right” is all he’s got. No friends stay around to console him, When he hurts he’s alone in his gloom; Those who would befriend him he insulted; Compassion has left the room.

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Robert Johnson

Date: 8/15/2017 8:07:00 PM

The title pulled me in. Hopefully he finally learns the RIGHT way. It's sad when one's own blindness perpetuates their loss of sight.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/18/2017 5:49:00 AM

A fun sarcastic write, Sunlite, sad that such people exist

Joseph May

Date: 7/14/2017 6:43:00 PM

What a great title for this poem Sunlite...Well written

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/13/2017 2:45:00 PM

I agree w/Maureen. Such a sharp pen and even sharper wit. Wise poem of deep gravitas (truth trumps always.) Love and joy, my dear friend.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/14/2017 6:29:00 PM

Surely appreciate your commenting, Freddie.

Sara Ella

Date: 7/12/2017 5:40:00 PM

Seen this before - it is sad to see... You have a great poem - a fun play on words. :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/14/2017 6:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara Ella.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/12/2017 12:45:00 PM

Nobody likes a Know-it-all! However, Real friends tend to overlook another friend's shortcomings. I'd say Mr Right had some flaky friends. lol Love the humor in this Sunlite.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/14/2017 6:27:00 PM

Probably so, Daniel - compassionate ones like you.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/12/2017 9:15:00 AM

Sharp pen! Love the title :) I think I know him... ;) xomo

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/14/2017 6:27:00 PM

I'll bet you do, Maureen! Thanks for peeking in.

Chris Green

Date: 7/12/2017 6:09:00 AM

This was fun Sunlite and I know people like this. I do feel sad for them at times because they do seem all alone and to me they express themselves like that for attention.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/12/2017 9:14:00 AM

You certainly have a point, Chris! Thank you.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/11/2017 7:54:00 PM

lol. I enjoyed your creative poem here Sunlite :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/12/2017 9:10:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi!