Sunlite Wanter Poet Light Verse

Mr Right Was Left

Mr. Right Was Left

To be right was his right
And everyone had to listen;
If, then, they disagreed,
Well, that was so much tension.

Mr. Right’s views were all his own,
Whether current events or not,
You have to feel so sorry for him,
Cause being “right” is all he’s got.

No friends stay around to console him,
When he hurts he’s alone in his gloom;
Those who would befriend him he insulted;
Compassion has left the room.

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Robert Johnson August 15, 2017 at 8:07 PM The title pulled me in. Hopefully he finally learns the RIGHT way. It's sad when one's own blindness perpetuates their loss of sight.

Joanna Daniel July 18, 2017 at 5:49 AM A fun sarcastic write, Sunlite, sad that such people exist

Joseph May July 14, 2017 at 6:43 PM What a great title for this poem Sunlite...Well written

Freddie Robinson Jr. July 13, 2017 at 2:45 PM I agree w/Maureen. Such a sharp pen and even sharper wit. Wise poem of deep gravitas (truth trumps always.) Love and joy, my dear friend. Sunlite Wanter July 14, 2017 at 6:29 PM Surely appreciate your commenting, Freddie.

Sara Ella July 12, 2017 at 5:40 PM Seen this before - it is sad to see... You have a great poem - a fun play on words. :) Sunlite Wanter July 14, 2017 at 6:29 PM Thank you so much, Sara Ella.

Daniel Turner July 12, 2017 at 12:45 PM Nobody likes a Know-it-all! However, Real friends tend to overlook another friend's shortcomings. I'd say Mr Right had some flaky friends. lol Love the humor in this Sunlite. Sunlite Wanter July 14, 2017 at 6:27 PM Probably so, Daniel - compassionate ones like you.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 12, 2017 at 9:15 AM Sharp pen! Love the title :) I think I know him... ;) xomo Sunlite Wanter July 14, 2017 at 6:27 PM I'll bet you do, Maureen! Thanks for peeking in.

Chris Green July 12, 2017 at 6:09 AM This was fun Sunlite and I know people like this. I do feel sad for them at times because they do seem all alone and to me they express themselves like that for attention. Sunlite Wanter July 12, 2017 at 9:14 AM You certainly have a point, Chris! Thank you.

Heidi Sands July 11, 2017 at 7:54 PM lol. I enjoyed your creative poem here Sunlite :) Sunlite Wanter July 12, 2017 at 9:10 AM Thank you, Heidi!