Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Mr Neanderthal Man

HEY! HEY!

Mr. Neanderthal Man
Where did you get those looks?
Hey pretty boy! Seen pictures of you
In my Ancient History books

WOW! WOW!

What a great physique 
Unmatched in these here parts
Should enter a Mr. Universe Contest
In a new category set apart

BAD! BAD!

Didn't mean to offend you
You do have redeeming factors
Lighting a fire rubbing sticks together
And avoiding nuclear disasters

HEY! HEY!

Mr. Neanderthal Man
Have you been living under a rock
Or are you much like us guys today
With faults like the rest of the flock?


© Jack Ellison 2012

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Laura Breidenthal September 18, 2020 at 11:44 PM Interesting one. I do wonder about lives in ancient times. Fascinating stuff. Always, Laura Jack Ellison September 19, 2020 at 11:52 AM Clever eh!!! LOL Fun too! XOX

Richard Lamoureux December 16, 2012 at 11:27 PM This is a fun one, I think I have seen him around these here parts. Jack Ellison December 17, 2012 at 4:49 AM Really??? Must travel a lot coz he's been spotted all over de place!

Carol Eastman December 16, 2012 at 12:12 PM Seen a few of these guys in my time... LOL... Jack Ellison December 16, 2012 at 5:21 PM LOL Every town has 'em! Love, Jack xxx

Sara Kendrick December 16, 2012 at 4:49 AM Got a chuckle..Some men are still Neanderthal..They are caught up in a time warp..Sara Jack Ellison December 16, 2012 at 4:52 AM You've got that right dear Sara! LOL Merry Christmas! Jack xox