Mr. Moon and Ms. Night

An August night waits,
For the setting of the sun.
Sparkles light her eyes,
When sunset has begun.

A romantic ambiance,
Moon nestles with the night.
Waiting to cast his love,
Of radiating light.

Reflections over waters,
The moon blushes with a glow.
Embracing one another with,
The love they both bestow.

A secret rendezvous,
Between Ms. lady night.
Dancing with her love,
As his poem's, he recites.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 11:37 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Raul please bring me some new ones to read. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 9:32 AM
This is still one of my favorite poems written by you Raul. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 8:34 PM
Unique.
Chircop Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 7:39 AM
Another gem--the way you described the sun,the sunset,the moon,the night..a beautiful love story.. another favourite,excellent-Charma
Gass Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 7:54 PM
This is wonderful, Raul! Great imagery and lovely flowing rhyme! Love, Robin
Fraser Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Raul, this is a delight to read >> James
Brown Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 11:24 AM
This is going to my favs Raul. You did a wonderful job on this poem. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 7:52 AM
Enjoyable little romance it brought to the night skies!! And all the stars are witness!!
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 3:51 AM
Great idea put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
Nutter Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 3:09 AM
And what a poem it is, well crafted and a delight to read. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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