Mr Moon

I wake up in the morning and sing a happy tune I nearly spit my coffee out 'cause, look there's the moon! What's the moon doing out in the light of day? I think I'll ask Mr. Moon and see what he will say! * * * It turns out "Mister" Moon, is neither girl nor boy it's gender neutral and goes out whenever it $#$@#* wants to! and I should mind my own %@i&^% business!!! but I don't know who Karen is... 1/16/2022

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Ann Peck

Date: 4/11/2023 8:54:00 AM

HaHa! This is really clever and funny!

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 8/16/2022 1:20:00 AM

I love it, P.S.! It's like a nursery rhyme! Good to read something of yours! I would love to see something new!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 8/22/2022 7:26:00 PM

Thank you and I wrote something new... Always good to hear from you dear Andrew :) ps

Andrew John

Date: 6/17/2022 2:45:00 AM

Ah, yes, a funny one. I like this one.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 8/22/2022 7:26:00 PM

Hi Andrew, thank you! :) ps

Ann Peck

Date: 4/19/2022 8:58:00 AM

HaHa! This is funny!I thought Karen was the woman who reported an Oriental woman for living...Her name was Karen.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 8/22/2022 7:25:00 PM

so glad you liked this one Ann :) ps

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/30/2022 1:01:00 PM

I guess he favors guy or gal, when romance is involved but it seems Mr. Moon has a secret or a gender identity crisis - Karen you mentioned...............?????????????????? A real fun poem! hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/30/2022 4:30:00 PM

Just something silly. A comment about everyone's touchiness and sensitivity these days... I think :)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/4/2022 8:12:00 AM

LOL, I'm in the dark about Karen but enjoyed this fun

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/30/2022 4:29:00 PM

"Karen" seems to me to be the new word for "busy body." :)

Bill Baker

Date: 3/1/2022 10:30:00 PM

Alight moon poem to close out my day. Thanks, P.S. Bill

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/30/2022 4:29:00 PM

thank you Bill :)

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 2/28/2022 8:21:00 PM

Sounds like Mr or Ms or ‘They’ Moon got out of bed the wrong side - perhaps with a slight touch of Karenism; it’s what other people have. Nice one P.S.!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/1/2022 9:06:00 AM

Thank you Geoffrey for commenting on this bit of silliness :D

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 2/4/2022 10:57:00 PM

FUNNY, FUNNY! Always great to read your lyrical and excellent work! Andrew

P.S. Awtry
Date: 2/5/2022 6:51:00 PM

So glad to see your avatar! You are too kind. Thank you! -ps

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/1/2022 10:24:00 AM

Delightful, PS. Am finally back home after three months. Feel like a vagabond.ha-ha. Pangie

P.S. Awtry
Date: 2/5/2022 6:49:00 PM

Hi Pangie! Glad you are back home! What a journey! -ps

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2022 10:11:00 PM

hahahaha. I finally learned who karen was when some idiot called me karen on FB. this is really awesome. and i like how you related it to modern life.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 2/5/2022 6:48:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! I am glad you liked this one. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/21/2022 11:55:00 PM

This is so cute and funny P.S. My granddaughter noticed that the moon looked like it had a face and she pointed it out to me and I told her that’s where the saying the man in the moon comes from. I prefer to think the moon is a female named Luna. : )

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/22/2022 6:26:00 AM

When my daughter was a tot, she said with her toddler speak that it was not a man—it was a”dirl.” it is a wonder that we see a face on the moon!. I’m glad you liked this odd little poem. Thank you -ps

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/20/2022 5:55:00 AM

Oh so clever, this. Love it.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/20/2022 7:49:00 AM

Thank you Harry! ~ps

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/20/2022 3:42:00 AM

MR. AND Mrs. moon and others - perhaps others would be the preferred word. or maybe don't look at the moon whilst sipping coffee. Good one P.S. HUGS, blessings, Jennifer

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/20/2022 7:49:00 AM

Just a bit of silliness that popped into my head. :D. -ps

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/19/2022 4:40:00 AM

OMG, love this one! The last line sent me over the top! Happy Wednesday!!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/19/2022 7:18:00 AM

Oh good! Thank you Mike :) ~ps

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/18/2022 9:42:00 PM

Shocking me all the way down to my stockings! A real suspender-bender, P.S. lol. :) gw

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/19/2022 7:17:00 AM

Oh good! Thank you Gershon! :D ~ps

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/17/2022 5:41:00 PM

So funny! Sucked me right in and then let me have it. I like it a lot.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/17/2022 7:43:00 PM

Oh good! I’m glad you liked it! :) ~ps

Miranda Hawley

Date: 1/16/2022 9:02:00 PM

This is cute, but I don't think the moon knows who Karen is either. :D

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/17/2022 4:00:00 PM

Thank you Miranda:o) ~ps

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2022 6:14:00 PM

Cute write.. Mr. Moon looks good during the day :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/16/2022 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Eve! :) -ps

Wren Rushing

Date: 1/16/2022 12:23:00 PM

That Mr. Moon sounds like a real lunatic!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/16/2022 2:46:00 PM

Clever comment! ~ps

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/16/2022 10:36:00 AM

Hello P.S. Awtry, I think you had a nightmare. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2022 11:34:00 AM

Hello P.S. Awtry, Yes I do think that you had a nightmare. We had a snow fall last night. today the deck was shoveled I went at it slowly because the snow was heavy. Yes I have plenty of cocoa on hand. Enjoy yur day my friend. -Darlene

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/16/2022 10:59:00 AM

Maybe that's what happened! Thank you Darlene for reading my silly poem. Hope you are keeping warm and safe and have plenty of hot cocoa on hand! :o) ~ps

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/16/2022 10:30:00 AM

Sounds like it is time to change your brand of coffee! Aloha!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/16/2022 10:58:00 AM

I think you are probably right! :o) ~ps

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/16/2022 8:35:00 AM

Perhaps the moon is lost or exploring the secrets of daybreak. A moment well captured, PS.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/16/2022 10:57:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :o) ~ps