Mozaic of Me

Mozaic of Me

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" (John Ruskin, 1853)
                                          
Just like mozaic,
There are billions fragments of me
Some of them sharpy, some of them curvy
Sharp like dust-blades through my veins
So painful I laugh in my cryings
Curvy like my adventure scenes 
So joyful I cry in my laughings

No wonder they say, never judge people
No one’s life ever simple
Could you know what’s in their heart?
Could you capture their real image inside?

My mozaic is what I am
I got one tiny piece after I passed life’s exam
Billions fragments inside and outside my skin
Already made who I was in the past
And still building who I will be in future scene
Change, is what always last

Prima Adinda Minardi
(23/06/2011)
Contest Name:	All The Little Pieces
Sponsored by: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Hicks Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Mosaic... I don't think there's a greater compliment that a poet can receive. Many sides, creating the bigger whole... each piece still beautiful to see, even on it's own... I LOVE this one! And it's nice to see your full name (I thought Dinda was your first name, but I guess not)
Susan Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your win w/this piece! The title hooked me right away and then you did an excellent job describing how you're you - a multi-faceted you. I also liked the questions you asked too. and the ending was perfect :)
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:12 AM
And such a beautiful, soulful, mozaic. Many congrats on your WIN, dear Prima. Lainie
Knop Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win Dinda! These are great lines you've penned here!...Have a nice weekend1...Gert
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Very interesting one. Different and wonderful. Congrats on your win.
Mehta Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 6:07 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Dandi
Falotico Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Its such a joy to sharing 4th place with you!!! A fine write my poet friend,,,,always Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Congrats Dinda on your wonderful winning poem in the contest luv.. an excellent write and lovely entry.. enjoy top spot with luv..
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