Moving Through Water


You were water before I met you, immortal as the embryonic fluids  of your mother's womb
then He poured fire into your soul and you became a walking flame and salt of the earth 

You were but I child knowing only childish games then you grew up and now you are wise 
when I spoke to you last, you told me your little heart could not stand it anymore 

You looked up to heaven and asked God to come take you away, and he did for He knew, 
He had made a big mistake when He parted with an Angel such as you....

You were a star in my eye and a flower in my soul, but then one day you left as quickly 
as you came, you were once water, today you are the air I breathe as I remember you...
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Rodgers Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 7:42 AM
Dear Rose, a remarkable elegy expressing your grief over the loss of a beautiful soul, your mother, who struggled with immense burdens. It is a reclamation of an angelic spirit. I lost my dear mom in May of this year, and I do miss her. Autumn Blessings, Dear Rose, Daniel
DiMino Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 6:55 AM
Very sad for your lose. Heartbreaking. A mother is a mother eternally, never parting.
Sidwell Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 9:05 AM
Wow, quite stunning and moving. Excellent piece
Rose  Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 4:04 AM
Thanks for your comment Robert, have a blessed day !
Rolland Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 2:53 PM
so beautiful and touching, thanks poet
Rose  Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 4:03 AM
Thanks for dropping by dear Yann, have a blessed day !
Anaya Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 8:14 AM
A beautiful ode to an angel eternal in your heart, from water to the air you breathe. Breath-taking, sweet Rose
Rose  Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 4:03 AM
Thankyou for your kind review dear Anaya, have blessed day !
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 5:43 PM
your poem adds beauty to 'moving on' past grief, living with remembrances. Such beautiful and poignant words
Rose  Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 7:41 PM
Thank you dear Sara for your kind words, no greater sorrow than a mothers grief
Goldsmith Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 12:45 PM
"Moving Through Water" was a wonderful read and write. Great picture and Love both. Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away............
Rose  Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Thanks dear Paula, nice to hear from you always :)
Narain Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Heartfelt poem. Nice and passionate.
Rose  Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 3:23 PM
Thank you Jay, hope your keeping well :)
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