Moving On

We were at war.
Threw stones at each other,
hurled barbed insults
across a school yard.

Walked home from school
together, but not,
together.

Teased and tormented
one another
attempting to be liked -
or not.

The battle raged,
every recess a skirmish,
lunch a logistic
seating plan,
dismissal
a “Dunkirkian” escape

to the purity of play,
the touch of “tag – you’re it”,
the subtle favoritism
of Dodge Ball,
complexity of Hop Scotch,
impossibility
of Jump Rope.

We were at war.
Engaged in the battle
of the sexes,
not knowing how to
get behind enemy lines,
how to dance,
how to ask the enemy
“Would you like to dance?”

We were growing up,
feeling the urges of our hopes
and the hopes of our urges,
“testing the water with both feet”
venturing into the unknown.
Adventurers 
on a quest -
to find ourselves.

We were at war
with all that stood
before us,
unable to accept the
“status quo”,
unable to accept status
as a defining quality.

We fought “Quixote’s” windmills,
wrestled with the values
of life, of living, of things
as they were.
Each ignoring
the poet’s warning,
trying to be an island,
to achieve oneness.
Oneness, with or against,
any and all
who would take our
stones away,
leave us
as we wished to be.
Free!
to throw stones,
to hurl barbs,
across life’s schoolyard
at all that was
and wasn’t -
at who we were
and weren’t,
while wondering
how we became
who we are –
and aren’t.



9/6/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/9/2014 4:03:00 PM
What a cool poem. Examining life through seeing where we started out. At that crazy playground! I can really relate to parts of this and I still remember the boys doing their own things apart from us (yet sneaking up to to the jungle bars to see up our dresses !!) In those days we girls were not allowed to wear pants! I sure enjoyed this read.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/9/2014 7:59:00 PM
Ah Yes, Andrea, the dreaded jungle bars. This generations poor dears will never know the depravity of the metal menace. Now they teach all that and more in the fourth grade.
Date: 9/7/2014 11:57:00 AM
loved the visions you painted excellent piece
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Date: 9/9/2014 8:00:00 PM
Thanks Liam, I had some fun dancing down memory lane.
Date: 9/7/2014 8:07:00 AM
Amazing descriptions of childhood and growing up. I especially like "urges of our hopes and hopes of our urges"
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John Lawless
Date: 9/9/2014 8:01:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by always nice to hear from you Monterey
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