Blaine Anderson Poet Alliteration

Moving Forward

Lasting memories linger lightly,
Swarming in a sensitive soul;
Weaving waves of wishes,
Taking a terrible toll.

Nasty nightly nervousness,
Results in ranting rhymes;
Harvesting of high hopes,
And savoring sensual signs.

Conspiring cosmic circles,
Whisper winter warnings.
Briefly believing blasphemy,
Fights feelings forming.

Insecurity injects inspiration,
Rotting the ropes of revelation,
Killing the chance of consolation,
Providing the pride in proclamation.

Empty enriched envy.
Loose longing lust.
Love lasts a lifetime.
Try total trust.

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James Fraser November 8, 2009 at 1:50 PM Excellent piece Blaine >> James

Raul Moreno May 3, 2009 at 11:34 AM Blaine, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason April 22, 2009 at 9:12 AM Love the last stanza!! Great alliteration Blaine and now that it is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest!

Mohammad Yamin April 15, 2009 at 7:01 AM Blaine, Congratulations on your enchanting poem having won in the semi-finals. I wish you good luck in the finals. -Mohammad

Carol Sunshine Brown April 9, 2009 at 1:14 PM Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan April 5, 2009 at 10:03 AM Blain - Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round, best of luck in the finals – God Bless, MJ

Adeleke Adeite April 4, 2009 at 8:26 PM great alliteration. passionate is thy pen. a thought provoking piece....congrat on a well deseverd first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke

Carol Sunshine Brown February 27, 2009 at 8:31 AM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

Tyesha Ehigiator February 26, 2009 at 6:08 PM Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week..Fascinating perspective...God Bless*Tyesha

Brandee Augustus February 26, 2009 at 11:43 AM Impressive use of this form!

Sue Mason February 26, 2009 at 10:03 AM Excellent use of this form Blaine and I love the last two lines ... smile ... somehow they really tie into the title for me ... this is a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!

Michael Jordan February 25, 2009 at 6:32 PM Blaine - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Vince Suzadail Jr. February 24, 2009 at 6:23 AM Congrats Blaine on the featuring of "Moving Forward." Total trust is difficult at best. Vince

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery December 11, 2008 at 8:55 AM Its really good! :) Oh and I'm too young for you... I'm 14 lol