Moving Day

on a summer morn the hearse stops- he takes our leave

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James Foulk

Date: 7/17/2008 10:59:00 AM

really liked this one brain, well penned. thank you for reading my poem the old country road and for your comment. I got the idea from a painting that I own.

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/14/2008 6:38:00 AM

Oh dear. Well, we will all make that move one day. A part of life, but so difficult for those left behind. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/13/2008 12:23:00 PM

Hello Brian - very interesting haiku - liked it alot Brian -

Marycile Beer

Date: 7/13/2008 9:54:00 AM

Beautiful Brian. I must admit the title tricked me. I am going to be moving permanent this time so I had that kind of move on my mind. It is a sad but beautiful poem, God Bless, Cile