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Moves Like a Helicopter

flapping grasshopper
                                               moves like a helicopter
                                                quickly up and down

Copyright © Bl Devnath | Year Posted 2013

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June 15, 2013 at 9:28 PM

Clever write! I like how you put these haikus and senryu together. Edward

June 16, 2013 at 8:28 AM

Many thanks for you nice comment on my write. Loved always, bl

June 1, 2013 at 8:13 PM

Reading this reminded me of my late uncle who worked for Boeing as a helicopter mechanic. Good write for few words.

June 2, 2013 at 12:59 AM

Thanks my friend for your visit and comment. Loved always, bl

June 1, 2013 at 3:27 PM

amazing imagery bl

June 1, 2013 at 4:27 PM

Wordless but with word's sound, give you thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian

June 1, 2013 at 3:06 PM

:) I don't like insects, but you made this cute! Thanks for your visit.

June 1, 2013 at 4:27 PM

Wordless but with word's sound, give you thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

June 1, 2013 at 2:59 PM

a cute comparison, BL. And I am glad you liked my poem to India.

June 1, 2013 at 4:17 PM

Wordless but with word's sound, give you thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

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