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Moves Like a Helicopter

flapping grasshopper moves like a helicopter quickly up and down

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Date: 6/15/2013 9:28:00 PM

Clever write! I like how you put these haikus and senryu together. Edward

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/16/2013 8:28:00 AM

Many thanks for you nice comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Date: 6/1/2013 8:13:00 PM

Reading this reminded me of my late uncle who worked for Boeing as a helicopter mechanic. Good write for few words.

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/2/2013 12:59:00 AM

Thanks my friend for your visit and comment. Loved always, bl

Date: 6/1/2013 3:27:00 PM

amazing imagery bl

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/1/2013 4:27:00 PM

Wordless but with word's sound, give you thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

Date: 6/1/2013 3:06:00 PM

:) I don't like insects, but you made this cute! Thanks for your visit.

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/1/2013 4:27:00 PM

Wordless but with word's sound, give you thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

Date: 6/1/2013 2:59:00 PM

a cute comparison, BL. And I am glad you liked my poem to India.

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/1/2013 4:17:00 PM

Wordless but with word's sound, give you thanks a lot. Loved always, bl