Heidi Sands Poet Etheree

Movement

Move
Branches
In the wind
Leaves flip over
The red berries fall
Small sparrows fluttering
Flinging birdseed all around
Ripples on the water’s surface
Designs in the language of the wind
Moving my emotions until the end


Heidi Sands

11/25/19

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Gershon Wolf November 25, 2019 at 4:57 PM --'Design in the language of the wind:' That line alone moves MY emotions. Splendidly crafted! :) gw Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 5:17 PM Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your kind feedback on this :)

Vijay Pandit November 25, 2019 at 3:03 PM Exquisite imagery--I feel the wind. see the ripples..well done, Heidi. Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 3:32 PM Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear that :)

Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 2:56 PM A beautiful scene you have shared with us with your wonderful poem Heidi. Really nice. Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 3:32 PM Thank you very much Chris :)

Tom Cunningham November 25, 2019 at 1:44 PM Well written Heidi, love this form. Tom Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 1:49 PM Thank you Tom. I just made up my own combination of a Nonet and Etheree 'combined' and posted a new poem. :)