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Move Branches In the wind Leaves flip over The red berries fall Small sparrows fluttering Flinging birdseed all around Ripples on the water’s surface Designs in the language of the wind Moving my emotions until the end Heidi Sands 11/25/19

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Date: 11/25/2019 4:57:00 PM
--'Design in the language of the wind:' That line alone moves MY emotions. Splendidly crafted! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 5:17:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your kind feedback on this :)
Date: 11/25/2019 3:03:00 PM
Exquisite imagery--I feel the wind. see the ripples..well done, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 11/25/2019 2:56:00 PM
A beautiful scene you have shared with us with your wonderful poem Heidi. Really nice.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Chris :)
Date: 11/25/2019 1:44:00 PM
Well written Heidi, love this form. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Tom. I just made up my own combination of a Nonet and Etheree 'combined' and posted a new poem. :)

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