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Move On

You've moved on...... so why can't I? Why do i have 2 be left behind where no one can see me? In the darkness...where you left me I try to skip to the next point but I cant my friends tell me to get up on my own two feet and stand there with Confidence but I just don't know how When i take one step out of the darkness i end up right to the beginning again i don't want to be in this postition i want to be in the light with everyone else One day i'll be there smiling with my head up high and my hands on ma hips and that day you'll walk pass me and feel my Confidence...... You'll feel it....like a powerful wind and then you'll ask yourself what is this? and then you'll say It's all because I Move On by Richan Goodman-2-11-2009

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Date: 6/9/2016 11:01:00 PM
Richan, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
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Date: 7/29/2009 1:16:00 PM
Sound like a good plan, Welcome to soup, Moses
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Date: 7/29/2009 9:35:00 AM
I like the interesting presentation of this poem. The emotion comes through your words. You may want to do a spell check. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/27/2009 2:36:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Richan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2009 11:34:00 AM
Interesting work. Sara
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