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Mousey

I love my Mousey,
She lives in a field in BrushCreek, Tennessee,
Walking with her her of cattle,
As happy as she will ever be.

Without this there would be only she,
And i could make her as happy as me,

I miss her immensly, for thee i wish well,
For everyday i wish she wont sell, 
And I could show her in the Dekalb County Fair,
I would sell never an ounce of her.
Hehe not even one of her little white hairs.

Even when all the way over there,
Mine she is for no one but me to share, if I do so happen to dare.

Cute as a button,
A button her nose may well be,
Where I first touched her sweet little body,
Not once but twice sweetly,
For wherever she goes I could spot her, along with her sister and mother.

Many a mile away, for she is not at all,
Not at all what you would say a little grayish thing.

But a heifer who grows daily,
Only to shove the motherly tears away.
In my eyes though, she will always be, forever and always, my baby girl, my sweetie,
my beautiful girl, my Mousey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/3/2016 12:48:00 AM
JESSIE, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 12/8/2010 7:09:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write .. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 12/8/2010 4:47:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jessie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2010 3:06:00 AM
thank you for your comments, i havent been writing poems on blogs long so this was a good start i guess. i have tons more to put on so it would be nice to have advice about them too please. JLH
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Date: 12/7/2010 11:40:00 PM
Nice piece..but it is scattered..tighten it up and youll have a great poem.BG
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Date: 12/7/2010 7:21:00 PM
This write was a bit hard to follow, but once I re-read it a few times I found it very endearing. My advice is to watch your rhyme scheme and try to stick with it.
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