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Mouse House

who out foxed who?.... a fox chases field mice into the house mouse invasion.... Normandy, the cat, smacks lips while on night duty the sound of vagrants.... two different worlds are living just floorboards apart silence of the lambs.... scurrying feet on attic floor wakes man counting sheep an angry farmwife... a carving knife is missing from the kitchen drawer a tail-less mouse.... angry rodent chases the farmer and his wife three blind-sighted mice run up the grandfather clock.... grandma reads nursery rhymes new fangled mouse trap is set with a piece of cheese... dinner was a snap cow jumps over moon.... no creatures were stirring not even a mouse +++++++++++++++++++++++ Dedicated to "a mouse goes "squeak" !! For Skat !!

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Date: 10/10/2010 12:10:00 PM
wow great write here my friend thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/5/2010 8:13:00 PM
wow, How did I miss this funny set?? GREAT job, Carrie. I think this particular contest inspired some of the funniest stuff I've read here. I dont' really consider any of us were writing real haiku but man, it's FUNNY and clever stuff. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:50:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your big win in the Haiku contest with these tremendous Haikus so expressive .. enjoyed as u enjoy your win tonight with luv..
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:37:00 PM
Hoo wow-- what an adventure!! I loved that part about "saying cheese"! This sure was a fun haiku series, Carrie :) haha but I sure wouldn't want to be a mouse in your house :) Congrats on your wonderful win! hugs--btw, thank you-- I sure am happy you liked my pimple write :) nikko :)
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:36:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:35:00 PM
love the way they flowed into each other, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carrie
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Date: 10/4/2010 8:02:00 AM
very very witty.....every verse is original......I admire your style.....sincere regards .....Syd
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:54:00 AM
Just amazin, best of luck in the contest, I loved the flow..
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Date: 9/27/2010 4:25:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading..Glad that you came up with this idea..Sara
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Date: 9/27/2010 2:14:00 PM
Smile ~ I have a Shepherd that just "Loves" cats &, the cats "Love" mice &, the mice "Love," butterflies &, "I 'Love,' You,' Always," John!:) ~ "Smile" ~
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:46:00 PM
Nice group of haikus for the contest, Good luck, Carrie
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:58:00 PM
Ha-Ha. I think you need to get some more aggressive cats. Really funny poem, Carrie!
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Date: 9/27/2010 11:53:00 AM
I love it , what a great entry for the contest , good luck
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Date: 9/27/2010 11:34:00 AM
I enjoyed that!
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Date: 9/27/2010 11:13:00 AM
Wildly funny, Carrie! Field mice used to steal dry food from my cats' bowls in the garage -- while the cats watched! Of course, when they were kittens, they were always on the prowl. But when they got older, they let the mice have a field day. Couldn't fire my cats of course, but it sure did cause me consternation. Love, Carolyn
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