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~Mountains~ (Choka) Over the mountains Sun shines in all its splendor Beautiful trees stand out tall Birds assemble there Eagles soar right to the top Wild flowers covers the ground Blue mountains stand grand Deers and bears roam all around Eyes can't get enough nice scene All trees seem to glow You can feel God's loving touch Breathe in enjoy all the view. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 May.30.2015

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Emile Pinet

Date: 5/30/2015 9:29:00 AM

A feeling of "free" pervades within your words as you take us to the top of the mountain and show us your view of life. Emile.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2015 3:38:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Emile,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it dear friendWishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/30/2015 7:39:00 AM

Wonderful write and spectacular photography. Nicely done :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2015 3:37:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly,Casarah, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 5/30/2015 6:23:00 AM

Hi, Dorian, gorgeous pictures and lovely poem I'm reading this morning. A 7, ...Darlene

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2015 3:35:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly,Darlene, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it and the 7.I'll visit your pages very soon.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2015 3:58:00 AM

simply stunning Dorian - you don't need images the imagery is wonderful on its own! Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2015 3:30:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Jan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciate your very kind visit and the 7 dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you! Hugs to you too!:)D.