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standing tall against the winds bursting open unwieldy clouds immovable, indestructible, majestic insurmountable by mortals something I always wonder does hatred rise with vapor to make you shudder do the birds ever warn you of the spectacle you are to witness are rivers the tears you silently shed at the carnage suddenly spilled at your feet is it the sun's warm sprawling embrace scaffolding you from crumbling over Written on 07/11/2016 for Julia Wards' "Mountains" contest Inspired by mountains of Kashmir in India.Ownership of Kashmir has been the source of discord between India and Pakistan.Years of war have witnessed blood spilled in the paradise like valleys of Kashmir

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Date: 7/22/2016 3:37:00 PM
Congrats well written great poem x
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Date: 7/21/2016 2:18:00 PM
Sara, I read your poem twice. Your questions are heart rending! Congrats on your placement!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/21/2016 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Balveen, they are silent spectators to so much evil:(
Date: 7/19/2016 10:54:00 AM
Sara, Congratulations on your win. Skat
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/21/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thanks a lot Skat!
Date: 7/18/2016 3:24:00 PM
I would love to see these mountains.....good personification of the mountain, Congratulations on your contest win
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/21/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Janis,they are spectacular!
Date: 7/18/2016 1:32:00 PM
Both powerful and touching, Sara. Congratulations on our placement in this Premiere Contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/21/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thanks a lot Sandra!
Date: 7/18/2016 11:33:00 AM
So touching when it brushes history...Congrats on your win. :) Sunita.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/21/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thanks dear Sunita!
Date: 7/18/2016 4:36:00 AM
Congrats well done xxxx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/18/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Wendy!
Date: 7/18/2016 1:51:00 AM
Well done, Sara, a strong write. Congrats! Viv x
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/18/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Viv:)

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