Mountains

standing tall against the winds
bursting open unwieldy clouds
immovable, indestructible, majestic
insurmountable by mortals


something I always wonder
does hatred rise with vapor 
to make you shudder
do the birds ever warn you 
of the spectacle you are to witness 
are rivers the tears you silently shed
at the carnage suddenly spilled at your feet
is it the sun's warm sprawling embrace 
scaffolding you from crumbling over


Written on 07/11/2016 for Julia Wards' "Mountains" contest
Inspired by mountains of Kashmir in India.Ownership of Kashmir has been the source of discord between India and Pakistan.Years of war have witnessed blood spilled in the paradise like valleys of Kashmir
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Rycroft Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Congrats well written great poem x
Cheema Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Sara, I read your poem twice. Your questions are heart rending! Congrats on your placement!
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:25 PM
Thanks Balveen, they are silent spectators to so much evil:(
A  Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Sara, Congratulations on your win. Skat
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Thanks a lot Skat!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 3:24 PM
I would love to see these mountains.....good personification of the mountain, Congratulations on your contest win
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Thanks Janis,they are spectacular!
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Both powerful and touching, Sara. Congratulations on our placement in this Premiere Contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Thanks a lot Sandra!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 11:33 AM
So touching when it brushes history...Congrats on your win. :) Sunita.
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Thanks dear Sunita!
Rycroft Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 4:36 AM
Congrats well done xxxx
Chansarkar Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Thanks Wendy!
Wigley Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 1:51 AM
Well done, Sara, a strong write. Congrats! Viv x
Chansarkar Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Thanks Viv:)
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