Mountain Top Retreat

There’s a place in the Blue Ridge.
Where the mountain faces Tennessee.
It escapes detection and is accessible
only through childish reverie.

By all children who in their thoughts
and dreams of feelings not forgot.
Their young minds clouded in mystery
of fairy tale and chivalry of Lancelot.	

This Alpine glen, gently sloping meadow,
with Fraser fir trees and flowing well,
Periwinkle, sage and wild strawberry, 
Sporting Bee Balm and Oconee Bell.

Its praises sung by lonely whippoorwill,
a place for animals to share refuge.
Where the small rule in importance
and the large never think of deluge.

The log cabin long since turned to dust
A tiny pile of stone, not much
to indicate the love, the life
haunting this place with gentle touch.

The young girl in eighteen sixty two
left alone by need of country.
Then the daughter raised alone
who taught the animals to be friendly,

A legacy of love and life’s spirit spent
in this lovely place of quiet retreat.
Befriending woodchuck and white tailed deer
and others she would chance to meet. 

The animals learned that survival of the fittest
did not belong in this place of loving favor.
That it was much more beneficial
to learn to live lovingly together.

©  May 04 2010 For Mac's "Your Best Poem" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/11/2010 8:34:00 AM
What a beauty this poem is, Charles!! So much detail, and filled with nature's wonder, sentiment and loveliness! A best...indeed! ~ Carrie
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Date: 6/11/2010 6:30:00 AM
Incredible imagery - beautiful write! Congrats on your most well deserved win! love, shar
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Date: 6/10/2010 7:15:00 PM
Congrats on the 9th place win, Charles.
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Date: 6/10/2010 7:02:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your big win in Mac's contest with this wonderful entry... a delight to see it win and enjoy your success and victory ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:49:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. I really like the message in the last line. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Mac's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep your pen flowing. Karen
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:30:00 PM
Great poem. Congratulations on your 9th place finish in my contest.
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:28:00 PM
oh, great I wrote but. at least I didnt say BUTT. hahaha. This is a sweetly rhyming poem, and you sure described your retreat splendidly. Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:43:00 PM
Wonderful thoughts you have given to Mountain top Retreat. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/6/2010 5:46:00 PM
It reminds me of Snow White's forest. I would never before have imagined that Snow White lived on the Blue Ridge mountain ...and yet, I have often admired the Tennessee mountain as one of the most BEAUTIFULLY serene, lush mountains I've ever seen. The idea of the girl teaching the animals to live together lovingly reminds me of the wild birds at Myrtle Beach my father taught to fly up to and perch on his finger.
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Date: 6/6/2010 5:38:00 PM
visual. I like it
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