Mountain Sleep

Mountain Sleep 

Mountain sleeps once upon a lake
Yellow bird skims the surface of liquid blue
Draws in an insect on the slender beak
A subtle noise discerned as it gathers up the bug
Disturbances below are heard, a lifted fin, a splash 
In nervous motion the trout moves back below
Cheated by the bird who stole his living meal
Above the lake, below the gaze of mountain
Snow melts, rain rides the spine and washes down
To purify the path 
Make the past and present one and the same
Gliding between here and now
Mountain looks for a cover
But only finds the white of ice
Trees are used as toothpicks upon the ponderings
Lake is gargled with the blue and brine as mountain thinks
Wakes, meditates. It rises on green grass
Mirrored at the water’s edge
Pretends to see right through it
Then turns with each hour of the sun
Bakes with the red birds spinning like rotisseries
Mighty wings lift and swoop on clouds
Rivers rush with them to some lost town
Forsaking summer in a rush of churning waves
Joined by colored feathers keeping tempo 
Mountains are too heavy to go with them
They are only rocks and rocks don’t run or fly
They only fall and roll with wisdom into winter 
Tectonic movements take them slow along the land
Steeped in snow that covers everything with solace 
On the giant slopes pulled over like a blanket
The mountain, brought to its knees, to sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/4/2014 1:19:00 PM
Brilliant Earl. What a beautifully penned poem. I felt as if I was on a bluff watching this all unfold.
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Date: 10/4/2014 10:04:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much. I don't really do too many nature poems. Recently I have developed an interest. They are very soothing. It is enjoyable to create nature as you go. I still feel sorry for the trout who had his breakfast bug stolen from him by the bird. Thanks again for commenting. Take care. Earl
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