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Mountain-River

Sunshine helps melt snow, On the tall, busy mountain That's guiding her son. Sensing victory, After a long, hard journey River joins the sea. The river's mother- Mountain is proud and glad that Her son reached his goal. By Sadaf Syed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/22/2012 9:56:00 PM
I love how you personified things in your haiku set. I did that too. I had thought of doing mountain and river but this way you did it , never even occurred to me. CLEVER you.
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Date: 1/20/2012 7:57:00 AM
Three nicely related haiku...encapsulating the essences of river and mountain.
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