Mountain Mist

A cloudy blanket sheaths the peaks, Wrapped in blue, they look enthralling, Emerald trees behold the sight! Milky river of mist like creeks flows overhead this scene sprawling, What a magical view and bright! Here is found peace that this heart seeks, When the morning sun is crawling high to spread its radiant light! In wispy whispers, their glow speaks, Green, white and azure's soft drawling arouses sheer joy and delight! A myriad thoughts stirred within, God alone can such landscapes spin!
1st June 2023 Image #1 Trilonnet poetry contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 6/28/2023 2:17:00 PM
Great imagery in this very well composed piece my friend. I love the description. Made me think of a place I visited in my youth. A fav... God bless
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Date: 6/26/2023 5:19:00 AM
"In wispy whispers, their glow speaks", Wonderful write Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/7/2023 8:09:00 PM
This is indeed the splendid description of an amazing view ! This kind of rhyming is not that easy to do. Well done my friend ! All the Best in the contest.
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Date: 6/3/2023 2:29:00 AM
Splendid vision. Your poem is like magic. Best for a win.
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Date: 6/2/2023 4:54:00 PM
Lovely imagery and fine entry for the contest, Jo. It brought peace within as I read it. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 6/2/2023 6:40:00 AM
WoW! Jo, This is a good entry for the contest. I'm still trying to come up with something. You made it look easy. Good content and beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend:- )Alexis
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Date: 6/2/2023 5:18:00 AM
Beautiful images, Jo. Nicely delivered in this hard to execute form. Best to you.
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