Mountain In the Morning

Dusting of snow on mountain

   Foretells of winter's coming.

      Bright sun paints a pretty sight,

         ~~ like sparkling diamonds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 6:49 PM
A very fine example of a dodoitsu. We have already been foretold of winter's coming without the mountain. Where I am, I am very close to sea level.
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Pretty pretty imagery! Nice seeing you here today. LUv, Andrea
La France Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 9:02 AM
This is so enchanting, and so very visual, nicely done~~
Duffin Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 7:44 AM
Thanks again for the honour you awarded me in your contest. This is lovely we have had snow, a rare treat. I can see your sun painting diamonds on the mountains. To you joy and peace, Eamon
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