Mountain In the Morning

Dusting of snow on mountain Foretells of winter's coming. Bright sun paints a pretty sight, ~~ like sparkling diamonds.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/5/2011 6:49:00 PM

A very fine example of a dodoitsu. We have already been foretold of winter's coming without the mountain. Where I am, I am very close to sea level.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2011 4:38:00 PM

Pretty pretty imagery! Nice seeing you here today. LUv, Andrea

Constance La France

Date: 1/5/2011 9:02:00 AM

This is so enchanting, and so very visual, nicely done~~

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/5/2011 7:44:00 AM

Thanks again for the honour you awarded me in your contest. This is lovely we have had snow, a rare treat. I can see your sun painting diamonds on the mountains. To you joy and peace, Eamon