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Johnson's bromeliads & falconry: Spizaetus nipalensis (mountain ...

I am a baby eagle and I have these things called wings so I can fly and glide and float or so I am told . . . early each morning my parents leave the nest and swoop and drift on wind currents among mountain cliffs down and then high up, then down and down calling to each other and to the sky and they are soon joined by their friends I watch- flapping my wings but go no where mother says I am too little yet but mother I want to glide 'cause I am a eagle oh, it must feel so wonderful to feel the air and wind to have it take you away, away into the blue sky in my cliff nest I dream that I am the strongest eagle and that I fly the highest and have the best call one day, one day I will show them that I am a bird but right now mother has brought me breakfast so I open my beak and gulp __________________________ July 24, 2020 Poetry/Personification/Mountain Hawk Eagle Copyright Protected, ID 20-1271-255-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, I Am A Bird sponsor, Tania Kitchin First Place

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Date: 8/4/2020 3:38:00 PM
you did the theme so adorably, Constance. BIG congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:34:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats, I just love that image _Constance
Date: 8/3/2020 2:36:00 AM
In most of your poems I can feel your love for your mother.You must be missing her a lot i suppose.I enjoyed this poem dear Constance mam.Tender emotions of a baby eagle and that's you.:-)Congratulations on your top win. Keep inspiring.Much love sent to you:-)
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:35:00 PM
Deepa, thanks for the great comment, I suppose it is true mother always slips into my poetry, thanks for the congratulations too _Constance
Date: 8/2/2020 12:08:00 PM
Such lovely description Constance, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:35:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 8/2/2020 9:22:00 AM
I love the cute picture you picked for this great descriptive poem, Constance, great personification. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:36:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 8/2/2020 6:23:00 AM
Congrats on your top win !
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:36:00 PM
Patri, thanks for the congrats _Constance
Date: 8/2/2020 3:55:00 AM
Such a lovely poem Constance. The tenderness of a baby merged with the elegance of eagle. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:37:00 PM
Aditi, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 8/1/2020 8:51:00 PM
Big Congrats to win Top. To start with Baby Eagle is cute. Love.
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:37:00 PM
Anisha, thanks for the congrats _Constance
Date: 8/1/2020 2:34:00 PM
Constance, this is is a delightful, descriptive, appealing, WINNING poem. Great ending. Janice
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:38:00 PM
Janice, thanks for the compliment on my poem _Constance
Date: 8/1/2020 2:34:00 PM
Constance, this is is a delightful, descriptive, appealing, WINNING poem. Great ending. Janice
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:38:00 PM
Thank you Janice
Date: 8/1/2020 12:54:00 PM
Very adorable, getting into the dreams and aspirations of a baby eagle. So clever, congratulations on your top placement, Constance. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:38:00 PM
John, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance
Date: 8/1/2020 12:32:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your first place win, love your sweet clever poem.
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:39:00 PM
Tania, thanks for another inspiring contest and for my great placement_Constance