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Pilgrims gather at base camp kneel at her feet, hypnotised in awe of her beauty entranced, strength, endurance tells of victory or retreat, visions of glory triumphant peak dance, outdoor expedition deceased exposed, mind-numbing desire to reach suicide zone, adjacent to trash well preserved corpse disclosed, gruesome mile markers some identities unknown, preserved in bleak time human ice sculptures rest, buddhist prayer flags blow rainbows against stone ~ tranquil are the days when winds blow southwest standing in white riches, yet never alone

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Date: 12/5/2020 2:13:00 PM
Love this. says it all. The harsh reality, of trying to conquer against the almost impossible. well done. Enjoyed.
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Jo Chamberlain
Date: 12/5/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thank you. I was blown away when I researched mount Everest, to write this poem. Thank you for reading my poem, and for taking the time to comment.
Date: 12/5/2020 6:21:00 AM
A great tribute to an awesome mountain. Enjoyed the read. ~~
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Jo Chamberlain
Date: 12/5/2020 6:53:00 AM
Thank you.

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