Mound of Sorrow

oh how cold the drift of migrant winds unto the strip of lawn, their newly planted garden now slowly blooming with jasmines and herbs that rise above a pile of flakes. Will he ever know how she tended each bud unfurling fingers to touch the lattice of night stars? Her pale body leans upon a mound as she lifts her cheeks to seek his face on a hazy twirl of lamplight; while December’s froth scrapes her breath melting the dew…bending her form which drops in a waterhole of sorrow. . ----------------- Poem for Carol Eastman Sumbitted 6/19/2016

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Date: 1/11/2015 9:08:00 PM
Nice win Nette...Linda
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Date: 1/6/2015 3:44:00 AM
Great marvel Nette! Congrats on top win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:10:00 AM
This is great nette, I really enjoyed it;congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/5/2015 5:32:00 PM
Excellent, Congratulations on your win nette.
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:41:00 AM
such beautiful yet sad imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/5/2015 8:08:00 AM
Very fine title with a brilliant write, nette, congrats on the win
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Date: 1/4/2015 11:58:00 PM
Hi nette. Congratulations on win. Love and respect. God bless you. Rajat
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Date: 12/29/2014 3:50:00 AM
Awesome nette "unfurling fingers to touch the lattice of night stars?" use of word "lattice" is brilliant.Good luck poet >>>>rajat
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Date: 12/24/2014 1:00:00 PM
Beautiful poem enjoyed from you. Wish you Happy Merry Christmas, my lovey friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 12/24/2014 10:10:00 AM
Brilliant piece! Merry Christmas Nette!
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Date: 12/24/2014 7:53:00 AM
Merry Christmas, Nette.
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Date: 12/22/2014 12:57:00 PM
A somewhat sad, but endearing tale; beautifully penned.
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Date: 12/22/2014 12:27:00 PM
You have a GENUINE lust for words. Very good Nette
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Date: 12/22/2014 4:53:00 AM
- Nette my friend, a very beautiful poem - I wish you and your family a beautiful Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise // <3 2 U!!!
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Date: 12/22/2014 4:18:00 AM
deep drawing very beautifully painted nette truly excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 12/21/2014 9:28:00 PM
This is absolutely brilliant Nette, I could feel the creeping hush of the fog settle down upon the resting place, your words and expression are perfect. Great write my friend, blessings Carl
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Date: 12/21/2014 9:04:00 PM
Grief and love mix in your words . . . hopefully as the pain of lost eases without losing the dear memories, her love will blossom to honor his life by fully living her calling.
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Date: 12/21/2014 5:52:00 PM
Melancholy imagery sets the tone for this amazing piece filled with powerful emotions...best wishes
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Date: 12/21/2014 4:05:00 PM
How you paint a setting with strokes of tender images and restrained pain is unbelievable. The visceral utterances of lines depicting symbolism of flowers as a creative device works well for me. Can't get my mind off the end lines! A fave!
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Date: 12/21/2014 3:56:00 PM
Moving and eerily brilliant, your language and form is amazing, but what really makes it in the sincerity and subtleties of deep emotion that run throughout, Lauren
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Date: 12/21/2014 3:38:00 PM
Oh wow! A poet's poetry, so wistful and poignant in mood and tonality. I had to really pause to breathe in the last line. Your extraordinary style, even in the midst of death's theme really stands out, Nette!
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