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Motion Direction

God moves in straight circles in rounded lineal pointless points at the sharp of blunts we are slow to catch on racing about on oil and ice a fat ass can be a saving grace God loves Thank God

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/11/2024 5:32:00 PM

I agree we're slow to catch on, to read the carousel of words he gives us. Nicely done.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/12/2024 5:20:00 AM

Round and Round, a poet’s merry-go-round, with ribbon reins and cotton-candy tails, perhaps a tall ship, with billowy word-sails; each poem a pirouette, of polka-dot hooves, of pirate fierce flags, or puppy dog wags, of outrageous fish brags -- small dizzies in the center, or dare to lean outward at the whirling twirling edges -- Sara’s word-carousel….

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/12/2024 4:34:00 AM

"Read the carousel of words" -- love it! You get a poem as a thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/11/2024 1:14:00 PM

God is like a circle and includes all of us.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/12/2024 4:35:00 AM

Absolutely! And He loves His children dearly I believe. Thank you, Victor.

Silent One

Date: 3/11/2024 1:08:00 PM

A fat ass can be a saving grace... lol.. You are very clever with your words..

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/12/2024 4:36:00 AM

Bigger cushion...:) Thank you, Si; have a great day my friend.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/11/2024 8:22:00 AM

Hello Joe, Your poem is a marvelous exploration of paradoxes, juxtaposing straight circles and rounded linearity. The imagery of "pointless points at the sharp of blunts" is strikingly unconventional. The concluding lines about God's love and grace offer a poignant reflection. Truly thought-provoking work! - Blessings, Daniel

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/11/2024 9:48:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel; we seek together...bottom line -- all is faith. Till the veil of death, split.