Motion Direction

God moves in straight circles
in rounded lineal
pointless points
at the sharp of blunts

we are slow to catch on

racing about 

on oil and ice 

a fat ass can be

a saving grace

God loves
Thank God
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Buhagiar Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 1:14 PM
God is like a circle and includes all of us.
DiMino Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 4:35 AM
Absolutely! And He loves His children dearly I believe. Thank you, Victor.
One Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 1:08 PM
A fat ass can be a saving grace... lol.. You are very clever with your words..
DiMino Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Bigger cushion...:) Thank you, Si; have a great day my friend.
Rodgers Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Hello Joe, Your poem is a marvelous exploration of paradoxes, juxtaposing straight circles and rounded linearity. The imagery of "pointless points at the sharp of blunts" is strikingly unconventional. The concluding lines about God's love and grace offer a poignant reflection. Truly thought-provoking work! - Blessings, Daniel
DiMino Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:48 AM
Thank you, Daniel; we seek together...bottom line -- all is faith. Till the veil of death, split.
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