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March 2, 2024
Placed 1st: Mamma Poetry Contest by Silent One


 

In refulgence of the heavens above, where you are, Amidst blissful angels, O, you are my northern star, As I ruminate of selfless love, fond memories impart, Emanating from treasured affections in my heart. You are my hero, my holy guide, on this journey of life, My endearing smile, soothing sufferings of strife, Blossoming my dreams in your embrace sublime With grace enamored, through tribulations of time. Your teachings of morality, as earnestly I revere, In your righteous footsteps, I endeavor to steer, Feeling your presence, when every win, you still cheer, Seeing me rejoice, O, you too shed a happy tear! When I am gripped in grief, my mother, I hear you cry, With every breath of my anguish, how you too sigh; And when I am feeling lost, you are the guiding light, Guarding me from harm, you are my gallant knight. . Pages of albums now bequeath, the venerable you, Honoring gift of your love quite inimitable and true, Reminiscing in elation, keepsake memoirs renew, As embers of your benevolence reignite spirits anew.

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Date: 3/11/2024 7:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful Mother's Day write/tribute. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 3/11/2024 6:28:00 AM
Dear Vijay, A hearty congratulations on this lovely emotive testimony of a mother's love. It was a pleasure to read.
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Date: 3/10/2024 9:23:00 AM
You describe your love for you mum so beautifully and so poetically here.. Your poem flows and rhymes so well.. It is Mother's Day here in the UK, so I thought it would be nice to feature mum related poems.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 3/9/2024 4:15:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to your mother dear Vijay, mothers are ever present, ever guiding, ever loving, ever tearful for any of our mishaps, ever supportive and we took it for granted when young, ever there. But the cycle of life continues, and one day not too too far away, it will be our number called up and our children and grandchildren will think of us. Awesome, brilliant, loving poem to you Mother Vijay, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/5/2024 2:12:00 PM
A mother's love is eternal, her light is our guiding star, Beautiful tribute to your Mom Vijay
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Date: 3/5/2024 8:14:00 AM
"Feeling your presence, when every win, you still cheer, Seeing me rejoice, O, you too shed a happy tear!" If only more parents understood what influence their own behavior -- or lack of -- has on the psyche of a child. "When I am gripped in grief, my mother, I hear you cry, With every breath of my anguish, how you too sigh;" Mothers' love nearest to God's Love, how He must feel, thus gives grace. Wonderful poem!
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Date: 3/5/2024 7:08:00 AM
You captured the very essence of a mother's love. Warm and wisdom-filled. SO will surely love this!
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Date: 3/5/2024 1:30:00 AM
Such a beautiful dedication to your Mum, dear Vijay. How fortunate are we to have have had that love and guidance in our lives. I come from a family of eight, five girls and three boys. Now when i think back with fond memories of my Mother, I cannot help but feel that she was an Angel put in our midst. If we tested her patience, we didn't see her frustration. Your Mother sounds a wonderful sweet Soul. Good luck in the contest dear Vijay...Hugs
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Date: 3/4/2024 9:33:00 PM
What a wonderful, expressive, sincere tribute to your mother, Vijay! Janice
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Date: 3/4/2024 6:20:00 AM
This is such a lovely write thanks for sharing your poem. blessings
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Date: 3/3/2024 8:19:00 AM
Mothers love, one that is hard to express, youv done it so well here dear vijay. Its always so good to read your work and this is no exception, i love the flow and depth of emotions flowing in such eloquence. Your appreciation and gratitude for your beloved mother so very evident, i especially felt the lines “ When I am gripped in grief, my mother, I hear you cry, With every breath of my anguish, how you too sigh;“ gosh made me tear up reading this! A fave it is for me! Just so touching . BOL
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Date: 3/2/2024 10:29:00 PM
This poem is a lovely tribute to your beloved mother, Vijay. It is very beautifully composed, and a fave for me. All good wishes, Evelyn
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Date: 3/2/2024 7:58:00 PM
She will always be your ' guiding light on this journey of life. ' As fond memories and treasured moments remain in your heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Such a lovely tribute to your mother. Your thoughts caress softly around me. My best to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/2/2024 6:00:00 PM
A FAV for my list, my dear friend. Your love for your mother shines through in this meaningful poem, a tribute to her and your relationship with her. Good luck in the contest, Vijay! Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 3/2/2024 4:44:00 PM
a beautifully crafted poem/tribute to your mom. How deep your connection is with her even after her 'departure.' I share many of your feelings about my own mother and live by many of her moral teachings given generously and lovingly. Your mom sounds like the quintessential mother. You've captured the beautiful essence of motherhood and the bond the two of you still have. I especially liked the last two lines. great entry for the contest. have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 3/2/2024 4:04:00 PM
Your poem is a beautiful Ode dedicated to your exceptional mother, crafted creatively, Vijay. Your piece eloquently captures the unconditional love and support of maternal figures. Your words pay homage to the enduring connection between mother and child, recognizing the invaluable teachings and care that are passed down through familial lines. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/2/2024 1:43:00 PM
Dear Vijay, your poem beautifully encapsulates the essence of maternal affection and guidance. Your words honor the timeless bond between mother and child, celebrating the selflessness and wisdom passed down through generations. Reading your poem, one can't help but feel the warmth and reassurance of maternal presence. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt tribute to the enduring power of a mother's love. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/2/2024 11:47:00 AM
Wow ! This is a special tribute. Her teachings shine significantly. So well written my friend!! :)
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Date: 3/2/2024 11:44:00 AM
Love especially the next to last verse! I know how it is! I often just say, “Mom…”
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Date: 3/2/2024 10:13:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your Mother Vijay, mothers are priceless and are all so deserving of high praise. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 3/2/2024 8:33:00 AM
All the words united in so impressive imagery and so expressive beautiful language to speak about precious mothers won't suffice! But here reading your wonderful poetry that deeply speaks to my very heart bringing back so dear memories of so precious a mum! I'm so touched and thankful to have read so honouring a poetry that venerates your dear mum and render her Beauty! I wouldn’t find a more emotive, eloquent and artistic poetry! It is always with immense pleasure reading your amazing poetry dear Vijay. God bless you.
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Date: 3/2/2024 7:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Our mothers are special in our lives even after their death. They influence so much either for good or bad. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K
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Date: 3/2/2024 7:19:00 AM
Vijay, it's really wonderful that you have such fond feelings for your beloved mother. She must have raised you really well and her spirit and essence certainly live inside you.
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Date: 3/2/2024 6:20:00 AM
Lovely words, friend. God bless you always. love, Gina
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