Mother Wisdom

“If a child's mother be wisdom, his Father is  pleased!”

The word of wisdom is mother as love,

If child’s mother is found in wisdom’s  words,

Mother speaks wisdom from Father above,

Lively mother exalts in life’s word surge.

As child partakes in milk of it’s mother,

His exhale wisdom of her, shall promote,

He bonds with her, she shan’t ever smother,

She shall correct  errors of foolish quotes.

`O hear the words of precept, "Agape",

“Enter into pathway of narrow strait,

Manifest wisdom, concept Love’s copy.”

Concept the precept, the Immaculate, 

Ponder a pathway for beautiful feet,

Deny strives of boils in festers of seethe!”  

For contest: Mother
In Honor of: Constance La France 
By john moses freeman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beadnall Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Congrats with your brilliant placing with this entry. Blessings from Paul
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 1:14 PM
hey John congrats on a superb win, and many thanks for my placement in your contest, David
Minardi Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 11:35 AM
This is a good dedication and notes for mothers out there, John 'Moses'. Dinda :)
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Mother" contest Moses. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 11:12 PM
Congrats Moses on a beautiful win with this outstanding poetry on Mother and wisdom too.. knew it would be top notch my friend.. and thankxx so very much for my placement in your own contest.. much appreciated my friend..luv..
Taylor Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 11:03 PM
Congrats on your win, John. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
Cwiak Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 8:38 PM
Interesting write. I'll have to read this a number of times to get all the meanings I can out of it. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Walters Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:03 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win! :) Kris~
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Many congratulations John on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James
Mannan Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:10 AM
Congrats on winning the contest. This wisdom really deserved a victory.
Johnson Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Congrltulations on your big no. 1 tie. I salute you and your poem. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, John
Devonshire Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, dear friend. It is not surprising to see wisdom at the top! Love you, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest John. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Big congrats Moses on your number one win in Carol's contest.. oh well who would not know this one would be a number one..its so awesome and amazing..and inspired and inspirational.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch write..my friend..with luv..
Culverhouse Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 6:50 AM
nice tribute to mothers!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 2:56 AM
Nice entry for Carol's contest. Good luck.
Moribund Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Hi John: Great poem. I really like the line "enter into the pathway of narrow strait,". Have a good day. Peace: Sheol
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 10:48 PM
What a very nice write. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day! Scarlett
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 8:57 PM
What a power house piece Moses.. this is sure to blow the competition out of the water..living water that flows from the heavens to your pen.. this is truly a lesson to study and learn .. am amazed at how the Spirit moves in us.. it still makes me awestruck.. with luv.. good luck...
Mehta Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 6:55 PM
I know your pleasure in life but this poem confirms it, John. Good luck in the contest
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