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Mother Tongue

We had a steel-coiled fence that kept us apart; kept in purity, spoke out in purity. We played Barbies in a tree that bordered each side, not knowing it had a zone. Our Barbie world was created; dresses hung on branches little mirrors for wee doll hands; leaves assigned our closets. I gibbered and you jabbered, and the worst thing happened, I learnt English, but what happened to your French? Language traveled through the holes of our steel-coiled fence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/3/2011 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry x3 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Gisele. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 7:49:00 PM
Congrats Gisele on "Mother Tongue" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Gisele. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Gisele. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:00:00 AM
Congrats Gisele, on your prose poetry bering featured. Vince
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:26:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Gisele
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Date: 1/15/2011 8:02:00 AM
Charming poem...sorry you had to learn english...ha ha Thanks Julie Heckman
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Date: 1/15/2011 6:06:00 AM
Dear Sara, it's uncanny how we find what we need. Thank you for enjoying my poem. Gisele Dear Carol; Thank you for enjoying my poem and I appreciate your kind words. Gisele
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Date: 1/14/2011 3:46:00 PM
Inability to communicate poses many obstacles in all walks of life especially marriage..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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Date: 1/14/2011 12:00:00 PM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Gisele. Love, Carol
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