Mother Tongue

We had a steel-coiled fence 
that kept us apart;  kept in purity,
spoke out in purity.

We played Barbies in a tree that
bordered each side, not knowing
it had a
zone.

Our Barbie world was created; 
dresses hung on branches
little mirrors for wee doll hands;
leaves assigned our closets.

I gibbered and you jabbered, and
the worst thing happened, I learnt
English, but what happened to your
French?

Language traveled through the holes
of our steel-coiled fence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 3, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations on your poetry x3 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Gisele. Love, Carol
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July 11, 2011 at 7:49 PM
Congrats Gisele on "Mother Tongue" being featured. Vince
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July 10, 2011 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Gisele. Love, Carol
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June 10, 2011 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Gisele. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
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June 9, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Congrats Gisele, on your prose poetry bering featured. Vince
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June 7, 2011 at 8:26 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Gisele
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January 15, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Charming poem...sorry you had to learn english...ha ha Thanks Julie Heckman
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January 15, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Dear Sara, it's uncanny how we find what we need. Thank you for enjoying my poem. Gisele Dear Carol; Thank you for enjoying my poem and I appreciate your kind words. Gisele
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January 14, 2011 at 3:46 PM
Inability to communicate poses many obstacles in all walks of life especially marriage..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 12:00 PM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Gisele. Love, Carol
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