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Mother Says

Mother says when he let me down, I tore up the flowers from the neighbor’s garden. I do not recall this, but his failing me has left a lasting impression. Written Dec. 1, 2015 by Andrea Dietrich for nette onclaud's "Fallen in 25-30 words" Poetry Contest 30 Words total by the Word Count Calculator Written about my father, whom my mother divorced before I turned five.

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Date: 12/12/2015 2:41:00 PM
A poem that hits close to your heart. Nice one Andrea. love phyl
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Date: 12/5/2015 8:22:00 PM
by the very subject matter this contest has thrown up some emotional writes...i like this one, andrea, it's very personal - congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/5/2015 3:22:00 PM
Emotionally hard hitting; children are effected by even the smallest things, let alone being left in the lurch. Congrats on another worthy win, Andrea.
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:38:00 AM
You lit pretty hard in love's backyard. Love, daver
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Date: 12/5/2015 2:26:00 AM
Well done Andrea. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/4/2015 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your win!
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Date: 12/4/2015 9:35:00 PM
Lovely win Andrea.. big congrats!
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:09:00 PM
Hi Andrea, wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:03:00 PM
With the exception of Ian's "Humpty Dumpty" every "Fallen" read has saddened me. We poets are an emotional, empathizing group of people (I could have said '..empathizing basket cases"). I felt you in this direct, straight forward write and I believed you - congratulations ... CayCay
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Date: 12/4/2015 7:23:00 PM
well done, Andrea... Congratulations. I'm saddened over your subject matter, but you turned out just fine. ;)
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:27:00 PM
Poems like this remind me how blessed I have been with the parents I was given to. Congrats and hugs.
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Date: 12/4/2015 4:36:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win Andrea! lu *smiles*
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Date: 12/4/2015 4:32:00 PM
a truly sensitive, superb piece, andie..sweet, fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs!
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Date: 12/4/2015 4:20:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/4/2015 12:54:00 PM
A heartfelt and sad write Andrea. Hope your weekend will be a good one ;)
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Date: 12/3/2015 10:38:00 AM
Powerful, sad and well written, Andrea.
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Date: 12/3/2015 9:49:00 AM
Extremely unique. A Fav!
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:57:00 AM
Andrea, what a sad and devastating memory.This write got to me and tugged at my heart strings. Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7
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Date: 12/2/2015 7:25:00 AM
Andrea, what a sad memory to keep, but your poem is brilliant in the telling, 7 ~
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Date: 12/2/2015 5:48:00 AM
Very touching and deep :-( few words that say a lot.
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:40:00 AM
- Sets a deep impression in a child's heart - Powerful lines, Andrea - I wish you luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2015 9:11:00 PM
Powerful and moving Andrea.....nice to see ya
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Date: 12/1/2015 6:32:00 PM
Hello Andrea... the bigger picture leaves the deepest scars - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 12/1/2015 6:20:00 PM
Hurt runs deep when a love looked for does not come . . . you nailed the aguish in this relationship!
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Date: 12/1/2015 4:46:00 PM
So sad... when things change for you at a young age it is so difficult emotionally.
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