Mother Said

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8/18/2024 for MOTHER SAID with Refractory Rhymes Poetry Contest sponsored by Suzette Richards

How many times must I tell you, monster? Goddammit, I think it must be the twelfth. Again! With mud on your feet, in you traipsed. You are making me extremely angry. Goddammit, I think it must be the twelfth. No Mom, I think it might just be the eighth. You are making me extremely angry. Hey, Mom, can I have a jelly sandwich? No Mom, I think it might just be the eighth. For dinner, you will have room for nothing. Hey, Mom, can I have a jelly sandwich? Why do you give me such a big problem? For dinner, you will have room for nothing. Again! With mud on your feet, in you traipsed. Why do you give me such a big problem? How many times must I tell you, monster?

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2024 7:09:00 AM

Way to go with this winner. It is so nice to see it in the winners' list. Congratulations to you. Sometimes mom's could tone it down just a little but you turned out okay. Sara K

David Crandall
Date: 9/17/2024 7:17:00 AM

Thanks Sara, haha, she was tasked with raising 4 boys. That makes keeping a clean house a difficult task!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/16/2024 3:33:00 AM

creative write dear poet. congratulations on your win. hmm did you get the jelly sandwich? beautiful poetic form.

David Crandall
Date: 9/16/2024 11:25:00 PM

Thanks. Yep, just about every day, after coming home from school, I would load up on sugary cereal (and sometimes jelly sandwiches), and not want to eat dinner.

Terry Miller

Date: 9/15/2024 7:44:00 AM

This is great, congratulations

David Crandall
Date: 9/15/2024 11:49:00 AM

Thank you Terry!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/19/2024 12:46:00 PM

Pantoum, the perfect poetic style for argument. We'll done.

David Crandall
Date: 8/19/2024 6:49:00 PM

Thanks Hilda, I was hoping it would work for a lot of repetitive statements back and forth.