mother of pearls

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Poetic Form: Haiku
Inspired: 2023 December 20
Image: N/A

white strands out to sea maroon roots cerise corralled oysters secrets pearls

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Silent One

Date: 12/21/2023 12:51:00 PM

Woah the use of words here create realistic imagery and that is what a haiku is supposed to be about.. nice one Hilo.

Silent One
Date: 12/22/2023 12:06:00 AM

I have not but have always wanted to...one for the bucket list my friend

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/21/2023 4:30:00 PM

Giddy-up. I don't know if you've rode a horse, as this once-upon-a-time, country boy did, and it's that feel of getting off right at that moment--mind settles fast. Thanks, Silent One. Aloha, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/20/2023 4:01:00 PM

such lovely imagery! I had to sigh after reading it...brought a bit of joy into my evening, thanks and enjoy your evening, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/21/2023 4:24:00 PM

Same to you, Sara. Much kindness always, my friend. Aloha, William