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Mother Moon

Sailing the sky-seas, Ship of light; ship of madness; Mother moon beguiles.

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Skat A

Date: 5/17/2015 9:07:00 AM

enchantingly deep. Forever *SKAT*

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/25/2015 9:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, Skat.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/7/2015 6:49:00 PM

superb ML hugs 7

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:14:00 AM

Thank you, Shadow.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/7/2015 5:36:00 PM

Wow! Interesting poem..... I enjoy the read,love it.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:14:00 AM

I'm glad, thanks so much.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/7/2015 1:20:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Tfs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:14:00 AM

Thanks so much; I'm glad that you liked it.

Constance La France

Date: 5/6/2015 9:17:00 PM

ML, you have penned well, 7, and thanks for visiting my poems, I have things. . .and I am . . .

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:15:00 AM

Thanks again, Broken Wings.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/6/2015 4:41:00 PM

Dear L.M. KISLER Love the feeling in this entrancing write of yours it is smooth great job. Thank you for your review of mine also, but is it about the mother I wish I would have had, not reality, again loved your poem, take care cheri

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:16:00 AM

Thank you.

James Fraser

Date: 5/6/2015 3:14:00 PM

Clever Haiku MLK, love the sky-seas, hugs, James :) :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:16:00 AM

Thanks, James.

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/5/2015 12:18:00 PM

Quite a tempestuous haiku here. Never seen that type before with so much action. Like very much.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:21:00 PM

Thank you. When I think of the Moon, her place in history and her beauty today; I considered everything and tried to use the least words to describe her.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/4/2015 9:45:00 PM

ML, simply stunning and oozing with beauty.. :)!!! ~olive eloisa :)!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:22:00 PM

Many thanks, Olive.

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 8:47:00 PM

lovely haiku, :) SKAT love

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:25:00 PM

Many thanks, Skat.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2015 4:50:00 PM

ooohhhh, I LOVE this KU!!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:26:00 PM

Thank you, I'm glad.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2015 3:11:00 PM

the study in contrast ( light and madness) is stunning.. great 'ku, M L.. huggs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:26:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/3/2015 2:55:00 PM

Yes she does, and she has made many appearances in my poems... I really enjoyed this wonderful poem, M.L. Very nice work! ...If this is for the contest, I wish you the best of luck!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:27:00 PM

Thank you, Kelly.

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/3/2015 10:09:00 AM

You have a certain way of looking at things that is refreshing to read. Well written. Emile. #7

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:28:00 PM

Thank you, Emile. That's a wonderful complement.

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/3/2015 9:47:00 AM

Delightful 'ku! :) Kim

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:28:00 PM

Glad you liked it and thanks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/3/2015 9:19:00 AM

This has a fairy tale quality! I enjoyed it very much.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:30:00 PM

Thank you Richard. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.

Nandita Das

Date: 5/3/2015 8:38:00 AM

What a beautiful haiku. Loved this. #7

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Nandita; I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/3/2015 8:08:00 AM

ML, I like this Haiku very much. The Moon for sure has a beguiling quality. The imagery is perfect. Best Always, Gary

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:25:00 PM

Again, thank you, Gary

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/3/2015 6:57:00 AM

She does beguile..Way to go with this one..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for all the stops by my work..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:24:00 PM

Thank you, Sara; I've always been captivated by the moon and the beliefs about it.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/3/2015 4:13:00 AM

"Ship of light; ship of madness" WOW...Perfectly stated and I LOVE the effective use of alliteration in this gem...Have a blessed Sunday my friend! - Tim

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tim.