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Mother Moon

Sailing the sky-seas,
Ship of light; ship of madness;
Mother moon beguiles.

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Skat A

May 17, 2015 at 9:07 AM

enchantingly deep. Forever *SKAT*

M. L. Kiser

May 25, 2015 at 9:30 AM

Thank you so much, Skat.

Shadow Hamilton

May 7, 2015 at 6:49 PM

superb ML hugs 7

M. L. Kiser

May 9, 2015 at 3:14 AM

Thank you, Shadow.

Afolabi Muideen

May 7, 2015 at 5:36 PM

Wow! Interesting poem..... I enjoy the read,love it.

M. L. Kiser

May 9, 2015 at 3:14 AM

I'm glad, thanks so much.

Ravi Sathasivam

May 7, 2015 at 1:20 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Tfs

M. L. Kiser

May 9, 2015 at 3:14 AM

Thanks so much; I'm glad that you liked it.

Constance La France

May 6, 2015 at 9:17 PM

ML, you have penned well, 7, and thanks for visiting my poems, I have things. . .and I am . . .

M. L. Kiser

May 9, 2015 at 3:15 AM

Thanks again, Broken Wings.

Cherl Dunn

May 6, 2015 at 4:41 PM

Dear L.M. KISLER Love the feeling in this entrancing write of yours it is smooth great job. Thank you for your review of mine also, but is it about the mother I wish I would have had, not reality, again loved your poem, take care cheri

M. L. Kiser

May 9, 2015 at 3:16 AM

Thank you.

James Fraser

May 6, 2015 at 3:14 PM

Clever Haiku MLK, love the sky-seas, hugs, James :) :)

M. L. Kiser

May 9, 2015 at 3:16 AM

Thanks, James.

Isaiah Zerbst

May 5, 2015 at 12:18 PM

Quite a tempestuous haiku here. Never seen that type before with so much action. Like very much.

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:21 PM

Thank you. When I think of the Moon, her place in history and her beauty today; I considered everything and tried to use the least words to describe her.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

May 4, 2015 at 9:45 PM

ML, simply stunning and oozing with beauty.. :)!!! ~olive eloisa :)!

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:22 PM

Many thanks, Olive.

Skat A

May 3, 2015 at 8:47 PM

lovely haiku, :) SKAT love

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:25 PM

Many thanks, Skat.

Andrea Dietrich

May 3, 2015 at 4:50 PM

ooohhhh, I LOVE this KU!!

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:26 PM

Thank you, I'm glad.

Nette Onclaud

May 3, 2015 at 3:11 PM

the study in contrast ( light and madness) is stunning.. great 'ku, M L.. huggs

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:26 PM

Thanks so much.

Kelly Deschler

May 3, 2015 at 2:55 PM

Yes she does, and she has made many appearances in my poems... I really enjoyed this wonderful poem, M.L. Very nice work! ...If this is for the contest, I wish you the best of luck!

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:27 PM

Thank you, Kelly.

Emile Pinet

May 3, 2015 at 10:09 AM

You have a certain way of looking at things that is refreshing to read. Well written. Emile. #7

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:28 PM

Thank you, Emile. That's a wonderful complement.

Kp Nunez

May 3, 2015 at 9:47 AM

Delightful 'ku! :) Kim

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:28 PM

Glad you liked it and thanks.

Richard Lamoureux

May 3, 2015 at 9:19 AM

This has a fairy tale quality! I enjoyed it very much.

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:30 PM

Thank you Richard. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.

Nandita Das

May 3, 2015 at 8:38 AM

What a beautiful haiku. Loved this. #7

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:29 PM

Thank you so much, Nandita; I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

Gary Bateman

May 3, 2015 at 8:08 AM

ML, I like this Haiku very much. The Moon for sure has a beguiling quality. The imagery is perfect. Best Always, Gary

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:25 PM

Again, thank you, Gary

Sara Kendrick

May 3, 2015 at 6:57 AM

She does beguile..Way to go with this one..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for all the stops by my work..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..Sara

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:24 PM

Thank you, Sara; I've always been captivated by the moon and the beliefs about it.

Tim Ryerson

May 3, 2015 at 4:13 AM

"Ship of light; ship of madness" WOW...Perfectly stated and I LOVE the effective use of alliteration in this gem...Have a blessed Sunday my friend! - Tim

M. L. Kiser

May 5, 2015 at 3:22 PM

Thank you so much, Tim.

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