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Mother Moon

Sailing the sky-seas, Ship of light; ship of madness; Mother moon beguiles.

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Date: 5/17/2015 9:07:00 AM
enchantingly deep. Forever *SKAT*
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/25/2015 9:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Skat.
Date: 5/7/2015 6:49:00 PM
superb ML hugs 7
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:14:00 AM
Thank you, Shadow.
Date: 5/7/2015 5:36:00 PM
Wow! Interesting poem..... I enjoy the read,love it.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:14:00 AM
I'm glad, thanks so much.
Date: 5/7/2015 1:20:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Tfs
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:14:00 AM
Thanks so much; I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 5/6/2015 9:17:00 PM
ML, you have penned well, 7, and thanks for visiting my poems, I have things. . .and I am . . .
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:15:00 AM
Thanks again, Broken Wings.
Date: 5/6/2015 4:41:00 PM
Dear L.M. KISLER Love the feeling in this entrancing write of yours it is smooth great job. Thank you for your review of mine also, but is it about the mother I wish I would have had, not reality, again loved your poem, take care cheri
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:16:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/6/2015 3:14:00 PM
Clever Haiku MLK, love the sky-seas, hugs, James :) :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2015 3:16:00 AM
Thanks, James.
Date: 5/5/2015 12:18:00 PM
Quite a tempestuous haiku here. Never seen that type before with so much action. Like very much.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:21:00 PM
Thank you. When I think of the Moon, her place in history and her beauty today; I considered everything and tried to use the least words to describe her.
Date: 5/4/2015 9:45:00 PM
ML, simply stunning and oozing with beauty.. :)!!! ~olive eloisa :)!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:22:00 PM
Many thanks, Olive.
Date: 5/3/2015 8:47:00 PM
lovely haiku, :) SKAT love
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:25:00 PM
Many thanks, Skat.
Date: 5/3/2015 4:50:00 PM
ooohhhh, I LOVE this KU!!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, I'm glad.
Date: 5/3/2015 3:11:00 PM
the study in contrast ( light and madness) is stunning.. great 'ku, M L.. huggs
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:26:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 5/3/2015 2:55:00 PM
Yes she does, and she has made many appearances in my poems... I really enjoyed this wonderful poem, M.L. Very nice work! ...If this is for the contest, I wish you the best of luck!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Kelly.
Date: 5/3/2015 10:09:00 AM
You have a certain way of looking at things that is refreshing to read. Well written. Emile. #7
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, Emile. That's a wonderful complement.
Date: 5/3/2015 9:47:00 AM
Delightful 'ku! :) Kim
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:28:00 PM
Glad you liked it and thanks.
Date: 5/3/2015 9:19:00 AM
This has a fairy tale quality! I enjoyed it very much.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Richard. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.
Date: 5/3/2015 8:38:00 AM
What a beautiful haiku. Loved this. #7
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nandita; I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
Date: 5/3/2015 8:08:00 AM
ML, I like this Haiku very much. The Moon for sure has a beguiling quality. The imagery is perfect. Best Always, Gary
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:25:00 PM
Again, thank you, Gary
Date: 5/3/2015 6:57:00 AM
She does beguile..Way to go with this one..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for all the stops by my work..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..Sara
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:24:00 PM
Thank you, Sara; I've always been captivated by the moon and the beliefs about it.
Date: 5/3/2015 5:50:00 AM
Tim expresses my feelings exactly.. Truly a fabulous write!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thanks again, Lyric Man.
Date: 5/3/2015 4:13:00 AM
"Ship of light; ship of madness" WOW...Perfectly stated and I LOVE the effective use of alliteration in this gem...Have a blessed Sunday my friend! - Tim
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/5/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tim.