John Michaels Poet Monorhyme

Mother In Memoriam

Our special bond forged even 'fore my birth,
years together through misfortune and mirth.
Since sadly snatched from the face of this Earth,
each action and deed to confirm my worth.

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14th April 2017

For the "Form M - Monorhyme" contest, sponsored by Butterfly Wings.
(Fourth Place)

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Eve Roper April 22, 2017 at 6:58 PM Nicely written , John, congratulations on your win. ~*

Paul Callus April 21, 2017 at 5:21 AM Back with congratulations, John! Well done and regards // paul John Michaels April 22, 2017 at 4:04 AM Thank you, Paul. Regards, John.

Constance La France April 20, 2017 at 2:43 PM John congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Monorhyme. John Michaels April 20, 2017 at 6:27 PM Thank you for running the contest and for my placement! Regards, John.

Alexis Y. April 19, 2017 at 8:33 AM Hi John, This pulled at the heart strings. Your heartfelt words "validated" the both of you. Well done. Congratulations on your fine win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis John Michaels April 20, 2017 at 6:22 PM Hi Alexis. Thank you for the kind and supportive words... I'm touched that my little poem resonated with you. Regards, John.

Connie Marcum Wong April 17, 2017 at 8:33 PM A mother's love is usually unconditional. I enjoyed this poem very much John. : ) 7 John Michaels April 20, 2017 at 6:16 PM Thank you for your valued comments, Connie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Regards, John.

Lisa Ricci April 17, 2017 at 10:57 AM Morning John. You did a marvelous job with the theme and execution of the format. Your words make this reader pause with your expression. Well done entirely. Good luck with the contest. John Michaels April 20, 2017 at 6:10 PM Hi Lisa. Thank you so much for your kind words & continued support! Regards, John.

Charlie Smith April 16, 2017 at 7:51 AM Nothing stronger than a mothers love, well done John... John Michaels April 20, 2017 at 6:06 PM Thanks for your kind comments, Charlie. Regards, John.

Paul Callus April 15, 2017 at 7:45 AM I enjoyed this short poem, John; the subject matter is one which never fails to inspire. gl in the contest. Regards // paul John Michaels April 20, 2017 at 6:00 PM Thank you, Paul. Kind words appreciated! Regards, John.

Joseph May April 14, 2017 at 5:19 PM A heartfelt write John...but the memories are a treasure..like Jan says we all dread that day when our mom is no longer with us...best wishes John Michaels April 15, 2017 at 4:08 AM Thank you, Joseph - yes, it's those memories that make us stronger... I just hope I continue to make her proud!

Jan Allison April 14, 2017 at 11:53 AM aww John such a sad poem - I am blessed and still have my mother. I dread the day when she is no longer with us:-( hugs Jan xx John Michaels April 15, 2017 at 4:06 AM Thanks for your kind comments. It was some time ago, but is still painful sometimes. I hope your Mother is around for many years to come! All the best, John.