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Mother Haiku

Mother Haiku Fresh rain charms nature Dew green leaves, squeeze, wet mother Turns, hugs the day clean

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2014 5:16:00 PM

what a wonderful personification poem

Earl Schumacker
Date: 8/25/2014 6:14:00 PM

Hi Andrea. I tried to capture a moment. Snow flakes are harder to capture because they prefer other paths of non warmth, so this was the next best thing... Now mom is clean. Thank you for your kind comments...all of them... Have a pleasant evening. Earl

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/23/2014 10:07:00 PM

Mmm that is refreshing, I love bare feet on dew dropped grass in the early morning :) lovely haiku Earl :)

Earl Schumacker
Date: 8/23/2014 10:17:00 PM

Good evening Casarah, I appreciate your comments and happy that you enjoyed it. I hope you have a nice night. Take care. Earl