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"When a man who is drinking neat gin starts talking about his mother he is past all argument." C.S. Forester's "The African Queen” MOTHER (A MUTTERING) My sweetheart gin is cast. I stare at her reflective glass. Like a crystal ball I see the past. A small boy in prayer at mass. Oh how blessed is my sweet Ma. Her sweet lips pressed to my brow. Back many years, I obeyed the law. Now swirls of sin seek the cutlass-crow. Her handkerchief, fringed with soft lace, would erase the smudge of familial rift. Her tender hands’d touch my small impish face, until the day I’d hop a ship and wrongly drift with suntanned palms, filled with whorish gin, to never see the waterfall, the etch of tears, the gray-spun wool that prayed to squelch my sin. Oh mother, if I could find those wasted years. I lay my head down on this feverishly cold bar. Every muttering sold as slave to my abysmal past. Your sky blue eyes hearken from heaven — so far from the deepest well of wailing gin, that sinks me fast. Ne’er woman clothed in silk or satin bait, were as attentive as my ma’s eyes of grace. Foolhardy fisherman, I’ve hooked my fate. Now I drown my sorrows, in the darkest place. 2/25/2018 Gin In The Morning contest Sponsored by Julia Ward

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Date: 3/18/2018 3:14:00 AM
his is wonderful, Kim - I so enjoyed this read! Blessings and congrats, Dear Friend! :-) <3
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Date: 3/17/2018 9:41:00 PM
Awesome pen Kim! Salty. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs! mo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2018 9:54:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen! :)
Date: 3/14/2018 9:08:00 AM
Awesome poem, Kim. Congrats on your well deserving win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2018 7:03:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 3/14/2018 9:01:00 AM
great Write Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2018 9:04:00 AM
Thanks, Donna!
Date: 3/14/2018 5:11:00 AM
Brilliant verse Kim, Congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2018 6:54:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 3/14/2018 4:32:00 AM
Such a talented write. Congratulations on your second place.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Rhoda!
Date: 3/14/2018 2:40:00 AM
This came a very close second in the "Gin in the Morning" contest. Well done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Julia!
Date: 2/25/2018 5:03:00 PM
Enjoyed from open to close... Brilliantly penned, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2018 6:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Melissa!
Date: 2/25/2018 9:54:00 AM
Kim, You have something there...this one has a special something to it...I'd be guessing if I said...I completely enjoyed it...All the best
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2018 11:25:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo! :)
Date: 2/25/2018 7:17:00 AM
Excellent and well written poem. Yes, can picture man with his drink and muttering all the way.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2018 11:26:00 AM
Thanks, Ravi!
Date: 2/25/2018 7:11:00 AM
I can picture the man with his drink..muttering as you say..well written poem, Kim. Lovely lines like..foolhardy fisherman, I’ve hooked my fate.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2018 7:12:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 2/25/2018 5:32:00 AM
Drowning his sorrows as he remembers his loving mom...Well penned Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2018 6:44:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph!

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