Mother

"When a man who is drinking neat gin starts talking about his mother he is past all argument." C.S. Forester's "The African Queen” MOTHER (A MUTTERING) My sweetheart gin is cast. I stare at her reflective glass. Like a crystal ball I see the past. A small boy in prayer at mass. Oh how blessed is my sweet Ma. Her sweet lips pressed to my brow. Back many years, I obeyed the law. Now swirls of sin seek the cutlass-crow. Her handkerchief, fringed with soft lace, would erase the smudge of familial rift. Her tender hands’d touch my small impish face, until the day I’d hop a ship and wrongly drift with suntanned palms, filled with whorish gin, to never see the waterfall, the etch of tears, the gray-spun wool that prayed to squelch my sin. Oh mother, if I could find those wasted years. I lay my head down on this feverishly cold bar. Every muttering sold as slave to my abysmal past. Your sky blue eyes hearken from heaven — so far from the deepest well of wailing gin, that sinks me fast. Ne’er woman clothed in silk or satin bait, were as attentive as my ma’s eyes of grace. Foolhardy fisherman, I’ve hooked my fate. Now I drown my sorrows, in the darkest place. 2/25/2018 Gin In The Morning contest Sponsored by Julia Ward
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Barden Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 3:14 AM
his is wonderful, Kim - I so enjoyed this read! Blessings and congrats, Dear Friend! :-) <3
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March 17, 2018 at 9:41 PM
Awesome pen Kim! Salty. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs! mo
Rodrigues Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Thanks, Maureen! :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Awesome poem, Kim. Congrats on your well deserving win.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thanks, Line!
Roberts Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:01 AM
great Write Kim
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March 14, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Thanks, Donna!
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 5:11 AM
Brilliant verse Kim, Congratulations.
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March 14, 2018 at 6:54 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Tripp Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 4:32 AM
Such a talented write. Congratulations on your second place.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 6:53 AM
Thank you, Rhoda!
Ward Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:40 AM
This came a very close second in the "Gin in the Morning" contest. Well done, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 6:53 AM
Thank you, Julia!
Tracy Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Enjoyed from open to close... Brilliantly penned, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Thanks so much, Melissa!
Michael Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:54 AM
Kim, You have something there...this one has a special something to it...I'd be guessing if I said...I completely enjoyed it...All the best
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Thanks, Arturo! :)
Sathasivam Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Excellent and well written poem. Yes, can picture man with his drink and muttering all the way.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Thanks, Ravi!
Pandit Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:11 AM
I can picture the man with his drink..muttering as you say..well written poem, Kim. Lovely lines like..foolhardy fisherman, I’ve hooked my fate.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
May Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:32 AM
Drowning his sorrows as he remembers his loving mom...Well penned Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 6:44 AM
Thanks, Joseph!
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