Mother

the sweet of all hearts, the teacher of my character, an ointment for my pains, undaunted partner of my days of rain, unflinching supporter of my aims, the friend of my needs, only the mother indeed

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Vera Duggan

Date: 3/3/2018 7:56:00 PM

Oh I do love this one "MOTHER", very well written, I am so lucky I still have my mother and she turns 100 in May, her name is Rosina Violet May and to me she is like a rose, thank you for this poem and take care.......Vera

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/4/2018 6:39:00 AM

Thanks you so much Vera. I today talked to my mom after a long time . she is ill and 70 i think. Happy to know your mom is going to be 100. May this Rose of you remain evergreen and blossom always in your life........ thanks and pay salam(peace) to your mom from me as well

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/4/2018 6:39:00 AM

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/28/2018 12:47:00 AM

Love the write. I have one called Lillian :)

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/28/2018 1:39:00 AM

thanks for loving.........Mother is always lovable i will check lillian............

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/25/2018 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, a blessing is always appreciated.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/25/2018 10:05:00 AM

welcome dear Richard

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 2/25/2018 12:21:00 AM

"ointment for my pain"..."friend of my need" WOW! I'd put poem on my fridge and read it every day... You're Mom is blessed to have you in her life. Fantastic This proves you are a poet ! bbn

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/25/2018 4:58:00 AM

Hi BBN, i am so pleased for your words of praise and prays. it will be a great honor for me , all because of God and prays of my mom and dad. i love your comments. from your comments , i feel that there is some long affiliation with you. Blessings of God for you and your mom as well. thanks a lot...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/24/2018 1:20:00 PM

You are blessed to have such a mother. I too am blessed in this way.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 1:32:00 PM

Yes Richard, mother is such a sweet relation that we are naturally bound by this..... Blessings of God for your Mom as well

Susan Baquie

Date: 2/21/2018 3:28:00 PM

Yes, you have expressed this beautifully. it reminds me of my own mother long gone and her kindnesses. thank you.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/21/2018 10:43:00 PM

Thanks Susan...Mother/father is no doubt a relationship without any impurity.................. love & pray for your mother and rest in peace

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 2/11/2018 1:36:00 PM

"Mother is the name for God in the lips and hearts of little children." William Makepeace Thackeray

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/12/2018 12:01:00 AM

Thanks Leanne for such a beautiful comments and referencing to "Great Thackeray" "Love to Mothers"

Judith S

Date: 2/7/2018 6:57:00 PM

Very lovely Mohammad. A tribute any mother would love!! ~Judy

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/7/2018 10:52:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Judith.

Becca Teagan

Date: 1/18/2018 8:58:00 PM

aw, such a sweet tribute to your mother, I love this :)

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 1/20/2018 11:06:00 PM

Thanks Becca , the mothers deserve more than this...this is just a little effort

Vera Duggan

Date: 12/31/2017 11:38:00 PM

Hi Muhammed, yes this is a lovely dedication to your mother, in fact this is the type of poem I would write for my mother, she turns 100 in May, great write. Take care......Vera

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 1/1/2018 12:00:00 AM

Thanks you so much Vera................and May your mom live long with happiness.............of both worlds Thanks and Happy new year

Carole Duet

Date: 11/13/2017 4:26:00 PM

How lovely, Muhammad, and what a nice dedication to your mother.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 11/13/2017 11:45:00 PM

Thanks Carole, it is a great pleasure for me to have a beautiful feedback .

Maria Williams

Date: 10/3/2017 12:07:00 AM

Indeed you have described a mother well here Muhammad. Great tribute...Maria

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 10/3/2017 12:17:00 AM

Thanks a lot, it is really inspirational