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The primal word I spoke at life's start, Not golden arches, but love's universal art. 'Ma' echoes in cultures diverse, Symbolizing eternal motherhood, a cosmic verse. In her embrace, warmth I'd find, Crying, my sole skill, in infancy confined. Rocking motions, lulling me to rest, Cries for heavenly attention, a baby's quest. Bad or good, day's play or lessons sought, In her eyes, the best boy I was thought. Discipline met with the utmost grace, Crafting a future, a bright, destined space. Stupid actions met with her concern, Anger transformed, in sermons, I'd discern. Rage one moment, forgiveness next, Guidance and wisdom, her lifelong text. Pain of daily setbacks mirrored in her eyes, Tears reflecting my life's lows and highs. Sympathy as balm for wounds unseen, Comforting, empathizing, a mother's serene sheen. For unselfish love, a constant well, Tenderness and goodness in heart's swell. An endless stream of care, a smile so bright, In dreams, she lingers, a beacon of light.

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Date: 11/16/2023 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. A lovely write/picture. I love this one. Have a great/blessed day with your win....................
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Date: 11/15/2023 3:59:00 AM
A heartfelt and sweet tribute to your mother and perhaps, all mothers. I am sure this is going to be placed high. "Guidance and wisdom, her lifelong text." Love it.
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Date: 11/10/2023 1:06:00 PM
This truly beautiful Jay. Such a heartfelt account of your Mother's caring and love. A fave from me.
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Date: 11/10/2023 11:28:00 AM
- Lovely written to your mother, Jay - ... "endless stream of care" ... that will never be forgotten :) - hugs
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Date: 11/10/2023 10:23:00 AM
So beautiful, i especially loved the line “ 'Ma' echoes in cultures diverse,“ profound and flows well with brilliant rhymes. This is very touching, goodluck for the contest
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Date: 11/10/2023 10:04:00 AM
Brilliant poem and a lovely tribute to your mum. Well written
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