Mother

In reckless abandon my mind trekked,
But I "became", by the ardor in your being
Despite the discomfort,
You preserved me in your pouch
When you could have chosen to wash me away

With great pains and agony you brought me forth,
Can I be ashamed of her that bore me?
One thing remains,
Even now that I am grown,
Your love I have not outgrown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 22, 2009 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Cardinal. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 10:25 PM
Beautiful! Cardinal. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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December 21, 2009 at 8:37 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 12, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Dear Cardinal, Congratulations on YOUR POEM " Mother " being Featured this week Welcome to the SOUP I say that for the number of POEMS YOU have Written Please come back and share YOUR Talent with us ALWAYS...HG
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December 9, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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December 9, 2009 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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December 8, 2009 at 4:34 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cardinal. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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December 7, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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December 6, 2009 at 11:59 PM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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October 11, 2009 at 1:24 PM
Great, honest poetry. I love the last two lines. Thanks, Kim
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December 17, 2008 at 6:19 AM
So true. A mother is everything without borders. the moments spent with her are always treasured deep in our memory and as you said "Your love I have not outgrown"...Lovely-write...tc...Sara...
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