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Mother Mentor and friend Heaven-sent, you my saint The root of my roots, my deep land Your traits ever I carry in my stand From your very core I expand Me suffices be proud Of my dearest Mother ˜˜˜˜ Mother My painful truth I learned not to whine Just your sweet memory to prize I hold you mum dear and even I smile Aches lose essence in your presence My heart but full of lumps Yearning for you Mother (Double Rictameter) August 28th, 2018

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/9/2018 10:58:00 AM

Hi Besma, A sad but beautiful tribute to your mom. How we miss our parents, and how we take for granted that they will be ever present with us, until the day they leave and we are left to grieve! I see you posted this poem in Virgo season, and in fact, slap bang on my birthday! Be sure my dearest Besma, that you will meet your mother one day, as we will all meet our parents! Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/12/2018 8:46:00 AM

Dearest Jennifer, my utmost joy to read your warm and comforting words.. indeed, our precious mothers do live in our hearts and words.. What a coincidence! The birthday of a beautiful soul and a giving warm heart.. my honour and pleasure dear soul sister. My warmest wishes. Stay blessed always. Love and hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/20/2018 9:45:00 AM

Hello Besma, a beautiful poem of your mother. God Bless you. Have a nice day my friend.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/20/2018 4:52:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Darlene for your lovely visit and genuine feedback. Always a pleasure to see you on my page. Best regards. Be blessed always.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2018 6:51:00 AM

- Dear Besma, I get a lump in my throat ... so wonderfully written to your dear mother - I think of my mother everyday and miss her a lot - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/4/2018 3:36:00 AM

Oh dear Anne-Lise, You are beautifully and achingly feeling my words.. thank you so much for your moving feedback, I highly value your presence and generosity. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 9/1/2018 3:05:00 PM

This is a really beautiful and touching write, you have done a really wonderful job in conveying your message in this really difficult form of poetry, double rictameter and here I am, I can't even write a sonnet,anyways coming to the topic, even the shelter of mother is enough, if she is living somewhere else,the fact that she is alive is enough to make you happy and when your mother dies, that shelter is lost, for no one can be more sincair to you than your mother, good luck

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/2/2018 7:40:00 AM

Faraz, the passionate poet! Thank you so much for your kind words and positive feedback! None is like a mother! Rejoice in her love and blessings.. May God bless and protect your precious mum. Keep shining. Be blessed always.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2018 1:05:00 PM

My heart shares the intense love and pain of your beautiful tribute to your Mother, my dearest friend Besma, and my soul celebrates in the joyful knowledge that we both cherished and now deeply miss our dearly departed Mothers. We are the fortunate daughters of a fountain of maternal love, in essence we are sisters, who were blessed to have such lovely Heaven-sent roots.. the exquisite beauty of your poem touches your avid reader tenderly and deeply with the power of your emotions and the rousing of precious memories. A joy to read your shining gem. Warmest wishes, love and appreciation.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/1/2018 10:28:00 AM

I'm very delighted and grateful to you dear for all the beauty you poured into my heart.. always a tremendous pleasure to be in your company dear Susan, my deepest regards, my love and hugs. Be blessed always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/1/2018 10:27:00 AM

The ache will never cease to float on the surface stemming from that deep wound of the last breath of so precious and cherished souls.. words will never cease to bend in awe, love and gratitude to a soul who is the core of my whole... Words won't suffice dear Susan to render their beauty.. dear Susan, we are from that very ocean of Love, from that very rock of strength and endurance, we are from that very lofty tree that is deeply rooted in infinite beauty.. You definitely do share and feel love and pain of my words..

Maria Williams

Date: 8/31/2018 6:35:00 AM

A wonderful heartfelt message to any Mother dearest Besma. How very true and this line particularly appeals to me 'Aches lose essence in your presence', how insignificant my troubles and whines were when my Mother was around. Thank you for the memories in this amazing Rictameter of yours. Certainly a Fave for me.....Maria hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/1/2018 10:07:00 AM

A heart of a loving mother and a talented poetess does feel all the words that bend to give tribute to all the living and departed precious mothers.. indeed all our whines, aches and anxieties lose essence in our mum's presence.. always an immense pleasure to see you Maria, be blessed always.. my deepest regards.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2018 4:13:00 PM

Indeed, words are never enough for us to pay tributes to our mothers, yet you managed perfectly well, Besma, cleverly making use of a double rictameter in the process. ~ Warm regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/30/2018 4:18:00 PM

All the credit goes to your wonderful "Mollie"! So much grateful to you Paul. I highly appreciate your honourable visit and lovely feedback. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/30/2018 1:08:00 PM

A well done, "Double Rictameter", presenting some beautiful sentiments. Thank you for the pleasant read.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/30/2018 4:20:00 PM

My pleasure M.L. Kiser! Thank you so much for your generous appreciation. Humbled and elated. Be blessed always.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/29/2018 9:16:00 AM

You have captured the essence of a mother...the only closest being to the divine...love & mothers...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/30/2018 10:25:00 AM

Precious mothers remain beyond words! Always a great delight to read your genuine feedbacks Winged Warrior. Thank you so much. Be blessed always.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/28/2018 7:29:00 PM

Lovely, Besma. A beauty!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/30/2018 10:23:00 AM

My pleasure and honour Line! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. So much humbled. Be blessed.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/28/2018 7:35:00 AM

Sweetness in your words...so loving, meaningful, a daughter who cherishes and respects her mother! A joy, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/28/2018 12:45:00 PM

What a lovely, cheering and touching feedback Kim! I'm so much grateful and deeply humbled by your visit and generous comment.. My pleasure. Be blessed always.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/28/2018 7:16:00 AM

An apotheosis of mother in a double Rictameter that soars as a thanksgiving prayer to heavens from were your mother's soul looks upon you with pride! A fave for me dearest, Besma! God bless you and your mothr's blissful soul!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/28/2018 12:41:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Demetrios for your wonderful and unique feedback! You outshine my humble words! So much delighted by your generous appreciation! Always an immense pleasure and honour to greet you on my page and read your comments. Stay blessed always.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2018 7:08:00 AM

This is such a heartfelt rendering..your love for mother flows in every word..as memories hurt. May you find comfort in all that she gave you. God bless you my friend, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/28/2018 12:28:00 PM

No words will render my deepest gratitude to you dear Vijay for your gracious visits and uplifting feedbacks.. Always a great delight to read your generous and praising comments. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.