Moth

MOTH

silly little things,
with nighttime wings,
corrupting 
wool clothes.
audacity to land
on my screen door.
but this poet
finds one,
passed out
on the floor.
wants to examine
its wings.
where she would
have thrown, this
miniscule plane out,
without
a second thought.
pressing
it into pages,
two flighty wings.
antennas that feel,
a great deal, of
silly little things.

8/11/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kiser Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Wow, a great read! Imagery is fantastic here and it flows very well. Yep, moths will eat everything that they can.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 11:08 PM
Thanks, M.L.
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Oh this is so cool too . You are showing such cleverness describing this silly insect! They are very annoying creatures indeed and I love how you called it a miniscule plane!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 11:07 PM
Thanks, Andrea! Hugs
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Very well depicted, Kim--the silly little things!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 5:29 PM
Thank you, Vijay :)
Sathasivam Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Thanks, Ravi!
Rigoler Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 10:42 AM
Nicely said. To set the record straight (or biologically) however, moths do not eat wool, their pupae do. Thanks for enjoying my eclipse poem. / M
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 10:51 AM
LOL! Thanks for the fact!
Horsman Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:30 AM
yes i too enjoyed this...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Thanks, Harry!
Sands Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:02 AM
This is cute Kim. I enjoyed it :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Thanks, Heidi! :)
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